Well... I just wanted to say I like how you wrote this. Not really telling who you were writing from or even really mentioning thier names... It was interesting and engaging. Keep writing.

Many thank-yous for your review of my Into the Light. I skimmed through your stories and was pleasantly surprised to see an entry for Pitch Black, a movie I too enjoyed.
I enjoyed this piece quite so; I like the decision you made with who would tell the story. He was quite a dynamic Character, especially near the end of the movie.
I'm off to read more of your stories.