love poetry- written in ink and paint and blood : .

Damn, the way you write is amazing.

:)

Short but still-GOOD.

Cha! That's so cute! NejiShika is positively adorable! The poetic language sets the scene really well.

Terribly sexy. Immortally wonderful.

'blushing uke vibes' *crackle*

i dont ship shikaxneji.. i mean, not really... do i?

argh, thanks for sharing _

Very delicate feeling. I loved it.

I love NejiShika pairing and i like how you write about them.

It's cute, then i like Neji's arrogance and how you describ Shikamaru.

Well done D

Well, I loved this couple so much (right after shikaino and team 10, of course).

Great job.

Ha, I loved it. Especially Neji. His arrogance when it comes to Shikamaru is just so cute. And so in character as well. Love it. Love it so very much.

Especially, '"You are a pain in the ASS." He'd smack the other, but why go to the trouble?

"Is that an offer?" '

Please write more!

I love this. This is my favorite pairing and it's terribly well written and in character. Thank you.

*Happy gasp*

Fantastic! I didnt think I would like a Shika/Neiji, because the pairing blew up a little while ago, but once again, I changed my mind.

Beautiful. So adorable. I loved it. xD

Very lovely fic. Hee, this pairing is so fun. I like how Shika can hold his own against Neji. XP Please write more soon!

fd97

i'm developing a love for Neji and Shikamaru fic and this one i loved much, nicely written -nods-

ack. this is shugawy shweet. *dies from sugar overload* I liked it _ again.

I love this. Beautifully written.