|Reviews for Lessons On an Incomplete Relationship|
| Guest 7/15/12 . chapter 1
I liked this fic and they all are pretty laid back
| CutieSOS 1/18/12 . chapter 1
odd but i like it.
| Maiden-of-the-Elements 6/23/11 . chapter 1
That was a great one shot _
| naash 5/24/11 . chapter 1
wow i love how you twist their relationship. its wrong but its so right
| The Deterginator 2/27/11 . chapter 1
THAT WAS AMAZING! It was funny and cute and I couldn't stop laughing!
| ImCutePoison 3/23/10 . chapter 1
That was dirty.. I like it. ]
| Cupcake 2/16/10 . chapter 1
completely badass , made me like Chouji more :D
| L's Successor 11/29/09 . chapter 1
wow .. intimate.
| YukiNoSamurai 10/26/09 . chapter 1
Wow, you did suprisingly well on this. I was not expecting this much enjoyment from it. Usually threesomes will either center around smutt or a three-person relationship. The second requiring quite a bit more work. I love the way you portrayed their relationship and their personalities.
If Team 10 were to have a threesome I'd imagine it to be similar to this. Maybe not as odd...but similar. All of their nonchalant attitudes makes it odd, yet sweet and humorous. They just stopped caring about others comments or reactions, and they just seemed to belong. I have to admit...some parts were extremely odd, but it was very well written. I absolutely loved it. And Team 10 threesomes aren't even my favorite threesomes. Haha. But this has to be a favorite. I'm surprised you don't have even more reviews than you do. Over 5 years, this deserves a flood of good critics and kudos. Great job!
| Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND 5/29/09 . chapter 1
Yay! Team 10 forever!
Really nicely done - not too in-depth, but getting into their heads without all the awful angsty stuff that seems to come along and spoil most good stories. Plus hot, but not totally indecent.
Call it 10/10 :D
| havocmangawip 1/6/09 . chapter 1
Wandered over here because anat-astarte recc'd it and oh my gosh... I love this!
Very sweet threesome and brilliant use of the Sexy no Jutsu.
Everyone is so great. I love Shikamaru and Team 10.
| childrenofeomund 9/13/08 . chapter 1
oh my, that was. . . sweet, and hawt, and so many other things that can't be put into words. I thoroughly enjoyed that, it made my day
| Shiruy 7/18/08 . chapter 1
Oh wow, this piece was absolutely amazing, utterly intrigueing and not quite like anything I've ever seen before. This goes definitely to my favourites. I love how their relationship just always... worked. And continues to do so. Very nice job you did here!
| overlordofnobodies 7/7/08 . chapter 1
That had to be the best 3 way I have ever read. Great gob!
| RedBrunja 6/30/08 . chapter 1
Oh. My. God.
There are no words.