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LutraShinobi
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abuseSnappy, short and sweet - all I can say is, I love it.

"waiting for their dinner to come and with ten thousand tomorrows waiting in the wings. And ten thousand other groups like this have done this ten thousand times and ten thousand others will do this ten thousand more, and maybe they'll all end up happy or maybe they'll all end up in hell" - I just adore that little section to death, because I think it really is the kind of philosophy that Orochimaru, Jiraiya and Tsunade all have/had, though they all twist it and shake it around and tear it to pieces in their individual quests for fulfilment.

A great, brief glimpse through the eyes of Tsunade on the two men who are undeniably "her boys", no matter what they've put each other through. It makes me wonder - how do you show so much, in just a few paragraphs? Because maybe, three cups of wine can be as good as a thousand, when you're sharing them with the right people.
fiore777
2007-08-06
ch 1,
abuseAh, I really loved how you wrote their relationship, it fits their personalities so well.
False-Image
2007-01-28
ch 1,
abuseWow, I'm just raiding your stories' list now. It was cute! Too bad Orochimaru's all evil now. I really like the way you start sentences the same but write two different options like, "maybe they'll all end up happy or maybe they'll all end up in hell" That was my favourite line ^_^
bloody river
2006-11-15
ch 1, anon.
abusecreative and intersting. i like the spin u put on this.
continue...

lata!
DeGlace
2006-09-30
ch 1,
abuseAbsolutely THE best sennin fic I have ever read. The tone, the characterization, the moment you captured... holy ** hell it was just so perfect.

I feel like re-reading this again and again until I can recite it to myself. I'm serious. Holy crap.

Straight into my favs... and off to check out some of your other work. I am so goddamn impressed right now. *awe-filled glance*
Ms Trick
2006-06-24
ch 1,
abuseThis was amazing. Everyone in character and such a raw moment...nice job capturing it. Not many fanfic writers come close to what this story just did.
Trenchcoatgirl-Kyo
2006-06-24
ch 1,
abuseThat was nice. Yay for freaks and Geeks! They all seem to end up getting to run their own ninja village, after all.
Tsunade-Hime13
2006-06-16
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely love it cuz its true the sennin have these things about them that just totally dont mix together and its just hilarious to watch them fight and bicker.
Kittycatcharm
2006-03-16
ch 1,
abuseVery cute :)
Pyrinsomniac
2006-02-18
ch 1,
abuseI love it; the style and tone complement it perfectly and I like the POV.

I also like the ringing tones of the second- to- last paragraph; makes you think of the other teams, and steers attention toward the dynamic, which was really the whole point anyway... and I'm rambling and really need to go to bed. Sorry. *grins unabashedly*
SkItZoFrEaK
2005-04-01
ch 1,
abuseWhew. Almost gives you vertigo, to try looking at this moment when they don't know what's going to happen but you do - sort of. Good one. Favorite, definitely.
SmashTurnip Girl
2005-02-23
ch 1,
abuseI really wish the Sannin were still getting drunk together and being almost-friends. ;__;
Really, really lovely, I adore the Sannin and the relationships between them. Great job. ^^
Mercedes no Inuarai
2005-02-19
ch 1,
abuseAw... I like that! You're right, they were friends and teammates at one point and people tend to forget that. It's the fact that the trust and friendship was broken that makes their circle so tragic.

I like the factthat you don't write specifically what they say. It's not important, afterall. ^_^
Gisela
2005-01-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseOne of those could-see-happening story. Very realistic in the Narutoverse I mean. And kinda sad because looming over the story is the reader`s knowledge of how ** up each one of them turned out to be. Loved it ^-^
Ruby Moon
2004-12-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseLoved every bit of it. Great Jiraiya/Orochimaru/Tsunade friendship/non-friendship one-shot fic, however you like to term it. Very great piece of introspection, and its hard to find fics like this, especially of the Sannin.
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