hn... i like it a lot. it's sweet.

I adored this reflection and the way you painted Naruto's character. Not to quote you to yourself, but I adored this line, cause it really captured that moment in the manga: "And something small and animal and ancient in the back of his mind SCREAMED."

KUDOS.

wow.

...

I love this threesome now. :)

is thet the end? cuz it doesn't say complete and i just want to know if i should add it to my alert list of not

Beautiful, just beautiful.

WoW!
That was so beautifully written!
It was totally fricken, deadly awesome!
I loves it!

Aaw!

i wanna give sasuke and naruto and neji and u a big hug!

uwaa... i like this ^^

I cant discribe the greatness of this fic, seriously. I LOVE LOVE LOVE it. I need more! Throw some Gaara in there! I havent seen any Gaara one shots, and he has so much one shot potential!

o.0 This is beautifully written. I liked this a lot, even though I don't usually like Yaoi...*shuffles off to explore more yaoi*

A bit odd but I still liked it. Awesome job

Interesting piece. :)

Cute =)