Aww the last poem is sad... What inspired you to write these? They are wonderful I might add.

The third poem was absolutely beautiful! I gather from its first line and all the feminist references that you might be Pagan? There are a lot of us at fanfic.net, surprisingly. Anyway, about the poems...The second one wasn't bad, but the first needs some work. You seemed to stretch your message in order to conform to a rhyme scheme; that didn't quite work for me. Some of your imagery seemed out of place, like the mention of halls (I don't remember there being any halls in Never land, nor where the Croc ever was). That's all from me!