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| fiore777 2007-08-06 ch 1,  | abuseI like that you have written this from Jiraiya's PoV, it is really nice seeing him reflect on the past, even if it is sad. Really liked how you talked about their first kiss. |
| Shadow-of-a-Demon 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI love it! It's so beautifully amazing! I really like the ending. OrochimaruxJiraiya is such an awsome pairing! |
| amberblood 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseaw, this is so sweet, and yet so in character...which is nearly impossible to write, kudos! |
| Mistress of Sadikus 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was kind of sad. It really got across the feeling that Jiraiya was just really tired. |
| Sryn-chan 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseyayness! sadly morbid in a way but also very very pleasing. I loved it. |
| Indecisive Mind 2006-12-26 ch 1, | abuse;.; Gyah...feel the angst. I love it! |
| Konoko89 2006-09-13 ch 1, | abuseWow that's deep i really liked this fic .. *favs* |
| yue no rei 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abusehaha what a strange ending |
| Paper Fans 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseABSOLUTELY SUMPTUOUS! FAV! |
| Sandra 2006-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat had me speechless, it was wonderful, OroJira is an excellent pairing. Love that could never work, a relationship doomed to fall T_T |
| boeboebi 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseYOU ARE AN AWESOME ONE-SHOT writer. i |
| Dragon Pearl1 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseKya~! I wouldn't call this sweet, but... Very nicely written and I loved the part where Jiraiya was debating if he should tell Naruto about Sasuke or not. I think everyone thinks that Jiraiya writes those books because he's unsatisfactory with life. XD |
| Firey-Moonlight 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseYou have officially made me fall in love with this pairing. Kakashi once said Jiraiya and Orochimaru had a similar relationship to Naruto and Sasuke (and we all know what's with that pairing) and now I read this fic. Its very well done and very real. I can imagine this type of thing happening. |
| WolfBane2 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuse(bows low to the all-mighty Sunfreak Naruto-fanfic-goddess) |
| Jen 2005-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've always thought about parallels with Orochimaru/Jiraiya and Sasuke/Naruto, I love this fic, its so cool and sad. I especially love the part about Jiraiya not answering when Orochimaru said he loved him, and then the next day Orochimaru's experiments were found. Write more stories like this! |