 ShinigamiPhoenix 2004-02-07 . chapter 1Um, okay, great fic. i love it, i really do, but... i'm an insy bit confused. you keep saying about how he wears spandex and stuff, but at the end you have 'Duo, Heero, and I'. Heero's the one with the spandex shorts. unless someone's been borrowing his clothes, i think you made a little mistake. i'm sorry to say it, i hate critizing others' work, but... i just got confused. still, it was a great story.
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