omg write more shikatema. please...?

Sunfreak, I know this was posted ages ago, but I still couldn't refrain from reviewing! This's an amazing story!

Your variations were nice, and your storyline, short and succinct. A beautiful combination of the right elements! Nice how you manage to make Shikamaru seem so nonchalant yet agreeable and unemotive; it fits snugly into his character. Temari, too, is the perfect depiction of her determined, must-get-what-I-want self. I'm glad she got Shikamaru!

Thank you, Sunfreak, for a fascinating, fabulous, frivolous read!

how i wish you inserted Naruto and his big mouth in the scene. haha. gotta love Shikamaru. Temari has that aura of confidence and passivity of what others think. nice one. :)

I read this one day and now i found it again and it is in my C2

mine...or his?

Shikamaru/Temari is definitely hot love!

WAH! FANTASTIC! I am amazed by your one shot genious!

Wah! Much love for this. This was silly and happy and oh so awesome.

"What if I LIVE for you?"

this is a good line. love it. so right when you think about it, i can't understand why haven't i...

Gasp! How passionate.

Haha, that one made me smile. I love the fierce Temari/apathetic Shikamaru thing. You're so pro.

AW a non yaoi i can aw

That was interesting and unique. Kind of disjointed but it suited the work well. I liked it. I like new and different. :D

~ Uozumi

aahhaha. xD That was so good and I love Temari.

i love these short chapters that you write - they're so cute!