   DramaQueen of the moon 2007-06-06 . chapter 5OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! SO COOL! TOO COOL! LOVE IT! I think I know who the werid person is! But I won't say anything, just in case I'm right! UPDATE ASAP! |
 reader 2007-02-27 . chapter 5 i wish people would finish their storys before posting them. this was very good i like the one pick line about the flower. and the way Dove came onto Beast boy . |
| RavenX11 2006-10-10 . chapter 1 Your stories are great I love them and I can't wait for the next chapter |
 Rainpath 2006-09-29 . chapter 5Oh, please, please, please update this! I need to know who the figure is! |
| Evilator 2006-06-02 . chapter 1 UPDATE ALREADY! IT'S ALMOST BEEN A FREAKIN' YEAR! |
| Black Flamed Phoenix 2006-03-28 . chapter 5 WILL YOU FREAKIN' UPDATE ALREADY!? |
| demoninuyasha 2006-01-12 . chapter 5 OH PLEASE UPDATE.I HATE CLIFFHANGERS.PLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PALEZ UPDATE |
| dragonthieflord 2005-10-30 . chapter 5 HEY I HAVE BEEN WAITIN FOR MONTHS OR SOO IT SEEMS LIKE MONTHS FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR BUT U NEED TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!ok iam fine i think but still u need to wrote the next chapter now! so do it NOW K
BB/REA FOREVA! |
 Miyu Mira 2005-07-28 . chapter 5This is awsome hurry and add more! |
| cd lover 2005-07-18 . chapter 5 DUDE!
NO! I DONT LIKE CLIFFY'S! THEY MAKE ME START GOING HYPER AND CRAZY!
Great, your just gonna do another cliffy now arnt ya?
Well anyway, back to the reveiw:
Man I would feel awfull if I where Dove, But she hadnt known so it's ok, right?
And who's the person in the black cloak? Is it the shadow Raven again?
Or maybe she has a long lost sibling that she never knew about!
DUDE! MAYBE THERES A WHOLE NEW BAD GUY WHO WILL BEAT THE SNOT OUT OF THEM, TORMENT THEM, AND EMOTIONALY SCAR THEM AND TELL THEM TO GO TO BED WITHOUT SUPPER!
Dude I gotta quit drinking all that apple juice!
Update soon!
P.S. Please make everything ok with the whole Raven/Beastboy/Dove thing,kay?
Update soon! |
| Frost-and-Sleet 2005-07-11 . chapter 5 I really do love this sequel but there are mistakes: First of all- Arella is Raven's MOTHER! 1. you spelled it wrong and second she is her mother! HAVE YOU NOT SEEN THE EPISODE The Propecy? In The Prophecy she returns to Azarath and she says "Mother..." nad such. Arella is her MOTHER. |
| Half-Gothic Chick 2005-07-04 . chapter 5 update real soon! |
| Half-Gothic Chick 2005-07-04 . chapter 1 dude your friend has the same name as me chloe!!lol |
| Kiko-chan 2005-07-01 . chapter 5 okay, Colie. I have found out that you are no mere mortal. But a TT fic GODESS! YOU ARE SO AWESOME! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I CAN'T WAIT MUCH LONGER! I WILL GO MAD!
~Kiko-chan
P.s. I especially liked the comment Dove made about BB's greeness. It was so original and hilarious! Good job! |
| fernnu 2005-06-30 . chapter 1 friggin awesome story! i absolutely love it, keep it up, i eagerly await ur next installment!! |
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