this is a good story, if you want to, would you like to team up and create a fic with my android?

Nice story,
a hunter, ranger and a force battling the creatures of Ragol.

keep it up

I luve it! My highest level char. is a RAcasel too! I am so going to read the next chappy when it comes. Good work!

And then what happens? Hurry, I'm taken in by your fic! I can't wait to know what happens next!
Great job by the way! I always wanted to play "Phantasy Star Online" But I never got the chance to. I only saw the story or the gameplay.
At this rate, this is my chance to find out more through your Fic!

Hey, FINALLY got to this. Not bad. Not bad at all. Though I've never played PSO myself, the way you've written this, I understand it perfectly. Keep it up!

Wow, great first chapter! I like the character, the way you have constant inner dialogues and stuff, that really lets you know whats going on, and what shes thinking. Great interpretation of the events in Pioneer 2 during the cinematic sequence, i think thats absolutely incredible. I think the best thing you could do is try and put a little more detail in your backround info before the story, maybe like, a prologue or something. Other than that, this fic is coming along great, and i look forward to seeing further chapters from you. Great job!

Good story lots of sadness and we need more Pso storys outthere.