it's good, i can assure you it is :D

this was soo god. If only he would come back again, and things would turn out the way you wrote it. I love it.

This is beautifully written. I like your writing style a lot. And although it's a pretty inconsequential line, I really liked: "This week he was staying in one of Gatsby's guest rooms." That's such a clever way to say what you're trying to say.

Really cool! I like it a lot!

i love it! i love it ! i love it! that's the way things should go! thank you so much for making this wonderful fanfic!

aww! very cute! i never would have expected rory to initiate a second chance, but this works very well. i liked the whole reading at the counter and getting closer thing. it was all very cute. can't wait to see where you take this! please update again soon!

I like it. It's different, and I must say I'm intrigued. The whole ignoring each other and what happened thing seems very in character for them, and I hope that you continue to write them this well. I really like the new approach. A lot of stories seem like mirror images of each other, but this one is different. You also have a very distinct style. Very cool.

wow. That was really good. If only the Palladinos cooperated with fanfics...

This might be short, buy it's great and you should definitely keep this a one-parter, because that's the charm of this fic! This fic is different from most of the 'Jess returns' fics, so I like it a lot, because it's kinda original and your writing is great too! I think you did an amazing job! And I liked your disclaimer by the way...it made me laugh...but a lot of things make me laugh, so I don't know if it's a good thing, but still...it made me laugh!

OOh. I liked this. A lot. Short and sweet. "Either way, his eyes did not look up at the noise, and hers did not search his out. They had closure, it had come in a phone call, a one sided phone call, and it had been forgotten, except for late nights of insomnia, where everything echoed and every memory came back to haunt them." These two lines really stuck out to me. She came in, and neither seeked each other out because they had had 'closure' but still, they thought about each other. They felt each other's presence, especially with Rory knowing he'd be there. I liked the signs she picked up on.
I loved the reading thing. That was perfect. Reading is one of their main connections. Each had a book, and each day they came closer and closer to each other. It was nice that she wanted to start with a clean slate, although I'm not so sure it'd be that easy. I always thought that Rory would be angry with him, leaving without a goodbye, but who knows... maybe she came to accept what happened, and they'll talk all that out later. Anyways... excellent last line. A great place to end it, leaving it open ended, like it could go anywhere from there.