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Reviews For: The Trouble with Potters
Coraline 2004-05-27 . chapter 6
First five chapters were very funny, I laughed my head off with some parts *looks for her head which is nowhere to be found* But this last one was so sad at the end that you could almost feel Sev's fear of losing his love. I have no words.
HecateDeMort 2004-02-29 . chapter 6
all of this series is great
Aria-fic 2004-02-07 . chapter 6
Oh, how sweet!
I might have to go back and read other fics from your trick or treat universe, now that I've sampled such a good one!
el 2004-02-07 . chapter 6
that was really very very sweet
memo 2004-02-05 . chapter 1
wow kewl
mistik-elf13 2004-02-04 . chapter 6
ack i would tell you off for that *grumble grumble* cliffie, but, i cant, seeing as i'm now using them myslef. urg. i love ur stories (yeah i read the other one thats at the moment rite above this one) and i would request that u rtie more son. thank you
~Mistik Elf
SiriusWolf 2004-01-30 . chapter 6
Nice job, I like the post-slash stories on Sev after Harry dies, in the final battle, Sev still lives on, because Harry wanted him to, or he goes to the funeral and becomes very secluded, reclusive even.
Sylvia Sylverton 2004-01-28 . chapter 1
first of all i love your series, and secondly this is in response to a review left by please no slash, how dare you be so rude, you say that her work is an insult to the writer J.K. Rowlings but what you said was an insult to all writers, to automatically say that their relationship is wrong just because they are of the same sex is wrong because how can loving someone ever be wrong? if you don't like you don't read it plain and simple. to say something cruel just because it's slash, to something you yourself haven't even read and then to not have the guts to sign in just really gets my blood boiling.
athenakitty 2004-01-28 . chapter 5
Going out on a date?
athenakitty 2004-01-28 . chapter 6
Snape's actually glad about the trip? Harry's a magnet for munchkins?
athenakitty 2004-01-28 . chapter 2
They are doing what was interrupted? Somebody walks in on the two of them?
athenakitty 2004-01-28 . chapter 1
Harry convinced Severus for a vacation? Almost did it on the train?
Please-No-Slash 2004-01-27 . chapter 1
I have never reviewed for any of the slash, fluffy, or whatever you want to call them stories before. I sincerely regreat that it is you Richan that is getting this review, but I can hold back no longer. I am sure that you are an excellent writer, and I direct the following comments more for all slash writers-- not just you.
I have glanced at a few slash stories just because my curiosity got the better of me. And everytime I do it makes my stomach queezy. I think that slash stories are totally obcene and should not be aloud. A wonderful person named J.K Rowling has created these charachters as they are. Harry Potter is not in love with Draco, or Colin or Ron, anybody like that. He is a wizard that, if anything has a crush on Hermione or Ginny. But to go and spoil their characters by doing such things with slash is wrong and disrespectful towards J.K Rowling.
I think it is wonderful your story ideas. You are all very imaginative people, and Richan I think your story would be an excellent story if you didn't use already molded characters. By simply changing the names of the characters and submitting it to possibly fictionpress you would be able to get numerous reviews, have it be all yours, and not distort the wonderful characters of Harry Potter.
Again I am terribly sorry to be submiting this under your story Richan, but I am sure your story is wonderful to those who have similar likes, and I am hoping more than yourself will see this. Please, continue to write, you have amazing talent for it.
~Blessings~
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