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I've found my favorite fic

Wow...

*sniff* I loved it,this is like the only fic i have been able to find of this manga, and i loved it!:D

great work!^_^

Gosh, it is so beautifully written. Thank you for uploading it.

Yay, Boys Next Door fic. There isn't much, sadly. (Of course, I'm not really helping at the moment, but hey.)

It's well-written, hazy and beautiful, a nice atmosphere for something fanficcing this series.

The small details contribute very nicely. "Beyond the cage of Lawrence’s hair, the ceiling is wet with rain – the roof is leaking, just a little." I don't know why, but I've always loved those small things.

Such a nice, sensual fic.

i finally found a boys next door fanfic!! and i love it! great work at capturing emotions here. *favs*

Oh wow...I'm utterly breathless. The story just flows so restlessly, so /relentlessy/, that it makes me want to shiver; the tone fits Lawr and Adrian perfectly. Brilliant story.

~Sarrasi

Brilliant, its so hard to find BND fics, i hope *crosses fingers* someone writes more.

Excellent work. Brief - but enjoyable. Great touch with the use of "balloon" as the safe word.

Aww! So cute! -^_^- there's not many BnD fics around (I think...). Love this, it's *exceedingly* well written. Brilliant work, have a nice day!

This is the first boys next door fic iv been able to find. Its beatiful, i think ur realy in touch with kaori yukis (my fav manga artist) charictors. And its wonderfuly dark and gothic (well id expect it to be concidering the story). Please, please write more BND ones...no presure or anythink *cracks nuckles*.

This is a very beautiful fic. You managed to capture the essence of K. Yuki's work and the character's minds. Truly amazing.

Wow, I never thought there'd be a BND fanfic in Beautiful piece of WORK! It gave me shivers just reading it. The funny thing was, I was listening to Portishead's 'All Mine', a very good song to listen to when reading the manga. There should be more BND fanfics!

Beautiful just beautiful.
This is very well written and even sad in it's own way. It kind of hints of what is to come..
Still, while reading this the reader has the impression that things will turn right somehow.
I like the way you portrayed their relationship here. Very true to the actual manga.
Sweet, depressing and tragic and giving each other hope for a better future..
Also, thanks for writing BND fic because I thought there was none out there.

Wonderful piece! Bittersweet... and the line about being released by the word 'balloon' was an excellent touch, a great link to the manga. *
*Sniffles*
Well done!
~H.G.~