Hi, I like the story, but did you know about Sara's past? Her mother murdered her father when she was around 11 or near there. Her mom is still in jail. I like the plot though.

It all came together in the end. Excellent story. I'm glad you finished it. :o)

Taletha, Thanks for the enjoyable (if long) ride! This was truly delightful and I'm glad you didn't leave it hanging in fic limbo! I look forward to more of your stories!

The baby's fine, the baby's fine, the baby's fine! (jumps around) YAY!

Monster Sofia. hehe.

:o( Poor Sara.

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Writer there's a HEE in my review

its not over is it? and i love the story!and really hoping that thers more!! plz!

Wow. Did the ** hit the fan or what?! lmao.

Nothing I love more than a good maylay of shouted accusations and misconceptions.

wow that wasa a humdinger of an argument. Sophia must be so proud of herself!
The next chapter has a lot of fence mending to do!

great story - i can hardly wait for the next installment.

Youch that has got to be a kick to the gut. I wonder what Grissom's reaction will be. Will Sara walk out or will Grissom make her listen to him? Damn I can't wait for the next chapter.

need new chapter

Hi,

I'm really glad you're still writing this story. :)

And there is no way in hell I'm going to make it until the next update. Loved this chapter. Humor and high strung drama, coupled with a lot of misunderstandings. Doesn't get any better than that.