This is amazing!! I love the way you write, wonderful imagery. The poetry is splendid, you are an extremely talented writer. Write more!

its good...i liked it...
kinda cynical - well not really...more of a darker version/ending to it...worded well

*stares at computer screen* I am SPEECHLESS! well, not really. I can always find something to say. lol! Sleeping Beauty and Rapunzel? Very unique! Fantasic job. Every word had it's own beautiful place! Update soon!

WOW! That was absolutly wonderful. I loved it! The poetry was so pretty and the story was so sad but beautiful! Great job! :)

wow- beautiful. So tragic and sad. The poem is gorgeous, as is the story itself. Can't say enough. Wow...

WOW that was amazing, it was so sad, I almost cried, and it takes quite a bit to make me even near to crying. Keep writing, you have an amazing gift for it, Good Luck!

First off, gnomes are evil. And second this was a good read. =) TTFN

wow!.. that was beautiful. i sincerely mean it too. Strange how you can make it sound so good, but it ends up leaving you all depressed :(. haha i love it!! keep writing like that.. you should get ur stories published or sumthing.

*sniff* beautiful and sad... great imagery.