Wow, this story is so good, I can't wait to find out more... oh, poor shuichi, i felt so sorry for him. brilliant story - update soon!

This is a really interesting story. I really like the way you handled the situation between the child and the adults. You didn't sugar coat it , you made believeable characters and scenes. I hope that you will finish this or at leat let me email you to see how you were going to finish it.

ha ha ha ha !! I love this story! it moves at a great pace and i definitely wanna read more...i know you have not added on in a while but hopefully you will cause this is a good one!! i hope she starts liking schuichi!!
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Hm, I just realized this the first time in two years that I have reviewed a Grav. fic. Anyway, I felt this story was worth braking the silence for. This story ws suprisingly good, not because I think you're a bad writer, but because I've read stories like this before and I haven't really found one I'm satisfied with. This one definitly ranks at the top. It was definitly _believable_ and I think that's enough to gain praise even if this wasn't a good story. I hope to see more soon, and I'm highly afraid to think of what Takako has done to that poor child's mind. What six year old acts like THAT? oO;;

Ok, I'm done.

Love it, more soon please?

Wow...I really like this story... Actually, I usually -hate- child-raising fics, and I probably wouldn't have ever read this one had I not gotten lost in this horribly long maze at grabiteshiyon.net, and then somehow ending up here with no idea what the story is about. I quickly gathered that it was a child fic, obviously, but your interesting naration really ensconced me. Anyway, I'm glad I read this, and I really hope to read more, even though I notice last time you updated was, *choke*, in March. So please don't leave me hanging and update soon! I'm addicted!

Cassi.

PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS UPDATE SOON... I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN TO YUKI'S LITTLE GURL... AND HOW YUKI AND SHUICHI HAVE TO CHANGE AROUND HER HEHEHE PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS UPDATE SOON PLS

*laughs* I love it! Everything's well written and very in character. The stuff going on between Eiri and Mawata is hilarious... And "evil uncle"! XDD I love it

cute!! i love it!! update soon!

hey!! GREAT work with this fic! u really know what yuki thinks! i would really like if shu and mawata would act more normal toward one another!! well take care and update soon!! .ag.

Everyone is very in charcter! I think I'll like this story... look forward to the next chapter.
Ja!

*laughs* That's just so great! This is definatly one of the best Gravi fics ever! *laughs* Damn, it's just so funny. I can understand why Mawata-chan's okaa-san doesn't like Shuichi *cough cough*. Anyways, great fic you've got here! Update soon, ne! ^^ *blinku*

Wow. The thing that made this the funniest, is the fact that you portrayed Eiri EXACTLY how he would react. This is really good. I await more.

This was a great chapter, as usual. Mawata is an absolutely adorable child, and Yuki's reactions to her are great. Hiro is eerily in character. You're giving my goosebumps.
Yay for SEXR :P

*squeals* I love the update! *goes through various parts* Let's see. I loved the evil uncle. "I want to talk to my evil uncle!" *snickers* "Do you lie well?"
Poor Yuki. I think you did a great job writing out the conflicting and slightly changing emotions he has toward Mawata. The description of her sitting on his lap...the things he noticed, the way it became comfortable for him...very well done. I'd write more, but Hiro has a date to write about in his journal *grins*