Such a sweet (no pun intended) ending.

I love your writing, it's very descriptive and paints a very lovely picture. I also gotta praise you for writing a good Puppyshipping story, since those good ones are few and hard to find.

I really really enjoyed this. It had me squeeing like a little school girl. Oh yeah, I am a little school girl. Very cute, especially when Joey realizes his crush. ^_~

Aww...extremely well written! Loved the character interactions and vivid descriptions~ keep up the good work!

aw
that was such a sweet fic =3
and so unique too!
i love the ending!

Very nice story!

I liked how you involved the vanilla ice cream in the plot.
It was a very cute idea!

I liked also the evolution of the relation between Jou and Seto

Your style of writing is very beatiful, very detailed

I hope that you will write more fics about this amazing couple (Joukai)

That had to be the greatest ending ever! I love how he just simply wrote 'YES' in vanilla, that's so cute and clever! Your writing style is indeed very different from most, but it had a nice flow to it. It felt peaceful, and one has to admire you for your excellent use of words in your descriptions! The whole story was excellent, I loved it very much! It was also nice to see the not-so-typical versions of Joey and Seto. The smarter Joey, and the kinder Seto.

I read this a couple of months ago. I thought I reveiwed it but I guess I didn't. Anyways, this was a cute, well written, and enjoyable story. It also helps that it has my favorite pairing. I liked this story so much that I printed it out (something that I very rarely do).

You have done an amazing job with this fic spinning from such a simple concept of vanilla. Honestly, this is terrific, your characters' personalities (especially Yugi, I heart your Yugi) and the lovely afternoons spent in the park...it makes me envious of the characters since I want to experience this slice of heaven myself. Oh, and you gave this a happy ending true to all romance stories. You are a poet at heart and I love this fic. Job well done.

Ooh. Naughty. *grins*

I really, really like this one.

Good work.

THANK YOU! Not for the fic, tho' I LOVED that too; but for the book. After finishing this fic, I went to the library and picked up the book Good Omens by Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchet. I'm only two-thirds of the way through and it's already my favorite book! I actually decided this on page four...! It's like a mix between Dogma and The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galexy. Thanks SO much,
Gonou

love it.

I love your story. I liked the way you wrote it becasue it sounded as if you put a lot of heart and soul into it. You didn't joke around alot in the aurthers' note at the begining. I have to thank you for this story because you don't find a lot of these around in this day and age. Kids and teenagers have no respect for art. Brats. Anyway your story is very well writen and has a right to be respected. Damn V. C. Andrews books. Have me all emotional.

Whoa! You don't know how HARD it is to find GOOD KaiJou stories with no sexual content!

... I bow down to thee...

I loved the simplicity of the thing that brought them together and the way the story was written to blend it in =)

Thanks again for creating a story with a KaiJou relationship not solely based on them doing it every few chapters ^^

- Syku

Aw this is so sweet!
I loved it

And a great epilogue! ^_^ The change in settings is a nice twist - the park at night and out of the park - making the epilogue a fresh extension of the story instead of just the usual wrap-up.