very... uh... whats the word I'm looking for... Interesting... but I liked it

A TOASTER!! HE KILLED A TOASTER!!

*backs away slowly* I think you need to see a psychiotrist.

Really, I'll even pay for it.

...*Anime fall* And here I was celerbrating that Malik was dead...*pots* Anyway good story! the last thing was unispected but... Funny! Keep going that way!

That was a bit...odd, but it was pretty funny. xD

That was insane. You actually got me laughing and that isn't easy. Good.

LMAO! That was great! Poor poor toaster...Ciao! ^_^

i thought he was killing someone...that would've been much funnier than killing an inanimated object...the world should die

Not enough groundwork in character creation. Where does the hate come from? What are the relationships between character? Descriptions of destruction is very common. I liked the ending! Clues for it could be in the beginning.

O_O Holy **! Don't do that! *clutches heart* For cripes sake, I thought at first he killed Malik, and then I thought it was Isis! But a TOASTER!?!?! Holy CRAP MON, that was SCARY! O_O O_O O_O O_O

Yasha:He killed...the toaster..O_o
Ten:NO!Not the toaster! >_<
Yasha:-_-*
Ten:I thought he was gonna kill the Pharoah!
DAMN IT ALL! >_<
Yasha:-__-*
~Tengoku-chan & Yasha-sama