cool story. i hope you post volumeI.

I just read this story again and I love it, even though it's not finished. The fact that I read this story again, even though I knew I would be sad in the end, because it isn't finished, shows how much I love this story.
My question is, are you ever going to finish this story? It would really be a shame for this story to be abandoned. It really is a great story.
I really hope you finish this story. If you don't, well... I'll just have to deal with it.

i`ve read so many stories from you. i hope you finish sometime volume I. I would love to read it:-)
thank you...

hey,I'm new here but I gotta say this is the best story I read and I would like to know why you have not updated. Please update this story. It's fantastic. You're great. I hope you consider my request. Thanks

Hm, love the story so much~! Please continue...i know that you're not feeling so well. I hope you're feeling better though. :) I AM SO YOUR FAN!

I loved it. Interesting story, well written...One question: What do I need to do to get you to write Volume 3 (and more)...Stand on my head and sing the national anthem...I will you know...and I'm not even American :>)

Love it! More more more!

Well, this chapter was certainly worth the wait. I'm totally ready to accept this as Grissom and Sara's true history on the show since TPTB have given up nothing. I love how, even though they hadn't spoken in over two years, Sara knew that Grissom was the only person she could trust to investigate her. And that she knew that he would come to California! All the more perfect for when Grissom needed the return favor, though I suspect that Grissom really just needed her- period! Hard to complain about the time between chapters when the one you've just read leaves you smiling for days. Looking forward to Volume I.

This story is wonderfully all encompassing and so well thought out! (not to mention extremely well written) I'm enjoying it. Thanks for making it so good. Can't wait to read more.

I'm wondering why I've never come across this before, but I'm very glad that I did, eventually! I don't usually go for pre-Vegas stories, but I figured I'd give this a try, and what can I say, I'm hooked. Can't wait for the next volume!

A great compilation of pre-vegas moments. I loved it, as always.

I enjoyed this story. I would like you to continue. I would like to see how it ends.

this was really good. i really hope you write more, this chapter ended on such a sad note things have to look up for grissom and sara. please write another chapter.

PLZ PLZ continue!! *damn cliffy*

ciao..please can you continue this story!?
it's so beutiful and i want to read a sequel!!
please...?
for every geek's fun!"!
:-)
you're the gratest writer!
cia ciao!