WHAT?
:D

sorry i can't be bothered to log on this is brillant! i like how you made it like not ew but more you can see how they feel without it sounding sick. which i LOVE and seems so does a lot of other people! WEXLOVEXIDENTITY99XANDXTHEXSTORIES!X we should have a fan club...lol

Your writing still is beautiful! I like it. It is strange and exotic, but wonderfully unique. :)

good writing, very real.

dude!! i loved the way you wrote this story my and my monkeys give it 12 thumbs up!!

Hi! I have just found your fic, I really like it, I prefer Holly/Artemis fic, but this one was very well written you did a great job!

Ooh, this is excellent too. I love the style.

You're a very good writer; I like how the stories are dark, without drowning in themselves. Very good.

You should go to Criminality and get some of this stuff posted there. This is good stuff.

It was good but barely rated M almost a T.Not tryin 2 be mean and if you fell its mean sry. but I've seen alot of M stories and its was good.I've never seen a riter geared twords wat you write make a good fic like this.

o very nice..i like this sotry a lot. and by the way..when you do the reveiwers corner..you can put me under the things catagory...i'm to strange to be a human...>:D
Zirra

Good story. Rated, but good. I liked the way you set it up, w/ the italicized words underneath. It gave it a very poem-like feel.

this is really really good!
its more like a poem... but really lovely style!
*mwah*

Quite poetic, very good for someone who isn't an adult?

O.O whoa...

I luv ur story. U should expand on it. it kul!

I loved it! I actully love anything with Artemis Fowl in it. Hehehehehe. I seriously loved it.