i cried man. still crying. that was so sad. excellent piece of work you have here. real tearjerker. *sniffles*

Great fic man.

Wow. That was great. Very interesting. Sort of uses the little surprise-game, though, doesn't it?
~Keep writing! Kyuu

I like it :)

*wipes tears away* ... This is so beautiful! *sniffles* I honestly don't know what to say...besides that is very beautifully written.

Aww...-glomps you- I wuv you! I loved this piece of work. Twas very sad. Good work, for being 3 years old.