 A midsummer Nach dream 2005-05-18 . chapter 8Gotta love val! she rules! i hope you write another one like this.. i loved the first one and this one too! |
 cheeky-chaos 2004-04-28 . chapter 8Cute! I absolutely loved the banter between those two, although the ending did seem rushed. I also understand the reason. Wish there was a little more.
Cheeky. |
 Lexa Pendragon 2004-02-19 . chapter 8The ending seemed really rushed. I still enjoyed the story overall. Just As an Afterthought. You may hate this story but lets hope you won't harbor any feelings of hatred toward the squel.(hint hint) |
 Lnkz 2004-02-18 . chapter 8I loved this Chapter!! I really like how well Val and her sister get along :) Awesome Awesome Awesome! |
 Ryko Sill 2004-02-12 . chapter 7still enjoying! Way to go!! |
 Lexa Pendragon 2004-02-10 . chapter 7I love this story i can just picture and hear him teasing. keep it up |
 Ryko Sill 2004-02-09 . chapter 1I read the whole thing so far, just to let you know... and I 'love it! Is there going to be more?
There should be! Keep it coming! |
 DC 2004-02-07 . chapter 6 Call me an ignorant kiwi if you want but I've never heard the term "macking" I like it. cool story. Thanks for not leaving it unended as I hate that too. |
 TheSpaminator 2004-02-07 . chapter 6 WHE!
They're not being asses to each other anymore. That's nice.
Skillful chapter; your writing and characterization remains excellent. Update soon! |
 DarkGoddessLuna 2004-02-07 . chapter 6Hi! You made a sequel! I have it on author alert, but my computer have been down, so I haven't read it 'til now.. Wow! I like it! keep it coming as long as possible! ^_^ |
 Lnkz 2004-02-07 . chapter 6As always great Chapter! :)
Yay!! for Logan and Val!! Keep the chapters coming! |
 carmilla 2004-02-06 . chapter 5 Hi,
so far I quite like your OC, just ignore the mary sue accusations - I mean, even if Val was a Mary sue - who cares when the story is good?
About your plot: it promises to stay interesting... I just wish you wouldn't change your perspective/POV every other sentence, I find it quite unnerving.
Or, as a guy in my creative writing class put it: writing is the art of leaving out bits... |
 Adyna O'Riley 2004-02-05 . chapter 5hm, getting a little more interesting now?
Is she gunna stay at the school? Guess I have to what for the next few chapters to find out, huh?
Good job.
Good luck. |
 Lnkz 2004-02-05 . chapter 5Excellent Chapter!! I give it an A+! :) I it made me LOL when Val said "Its all good in the hood" That was great! :) Again Great Chapter keep them coming!! |
 Adyna O'Riley 2004-02-02 . chapter 4wwo. Getting interesting. Logan's feeling a little protective, is he not? : ) Got to love it.
Woohoo! Annie gets ti kick some **! Go Minnie Jean!
So Val is probably gunna wake up in the schools little hospital unit. Or is she? IT sounds interesting, none the less.
Cant wait for the next chapter! Hope it comes out soon!
Happy Huntings! |