Dialogue was spot-on. But one teeny-tiny-little detail. He's married. And neither of them are adulterous.

Dialogue was spot-on. But one teeny-tiny-little detail. He's married. And neither of them are adulterous.

BRAVA! (or bravo, if you're a guy, but i don't think you are. whatever.) yay!

This is the most Gilmore Girls piece of GG fic that I think I've ever read. Wow. Total spin out. I love it, just amazing!

AH, What MIGHT have been, ("Stupid Priest!!")

very well done, I have to say this is the best TAKE on the "Bells Interuptus" (as It came to be known by the voices in my head.)

I liked the arguing, the Innapropriate stage...(HEHEHE), the only thing is we may need a hint that Nicole is over and divorce is certain...for Lukey Pookie,

as devils advocate, I was screaming at the TV with this eppy, "Lorelai just say it 'I love you, you idiot!!' " BUT, then Luke would have just become a jerk, divorcing his wife becasue finally ,his dream girl gets it. SHE gets it! the way it played out, Luke is a sweet guy, he didn't want to be lonely, he WAS TRYING to make it work. Besides, now we can HATE NICOLE because of the SOCK-MAN!! see, i wouldn't have come to this realization with out this story, thank you for the eye opener, and now we can appreciate the organic, romantic way they Finally did come together. (ps Jason is a jerk, i hate him too) thank you

okay...Well done! enjoyed very much.

I am sure that Mommy had a very intresting nite this is a great fic
from Kim

this was definately the best luke/lorelai story iv ever read! ur a great writer

Cute story! I wondered why Lorelai was so distracted...

Wow! What an AMAZING fic. The best part: it actaually could've happened! You're characterization was really exact and the description was excellent! I'm a big fan of allof your LL stories actaully, please write more!!

aww! thats so great! i thougt that the last episode was one of, if not the, greatest episodes so far this season!! all the luke/lorelai-ness...YaY!!..haha...but i was soo madd when the stupid revrand came and interupted them ((gr!)) so ever since then ive been looking for stories that had it go diferently ((i.e. NO REVRAND!!)) and i found my first one!! great job! :-D

I absolutely love this. You have the characters down really well. Can't wait for more!!

It was great, it really made me laugh. Too bad that minister had to come in. I especially loved "Right. So, maybe she should have thought that out a little more." and “I tend to be somewhat un-detail oriented.

Aw, yeahh. See, now THAT's how the show SHOULD have gone. You rock on with your bad self because this ROCKED! Keep writing!

i loved your story. i definately think the writers should have gone on with the argument also. you write lorelai babbling extremely well, by the way. are you going to continue this story?anyway just thought i'd write and tell ya what i thought.
~bambi-cat
p.s. anyway, i'm always advertising. would you please read my story also. it a lukelorelai and my first fanfic, so i'm dying for reviews. thanx!

Ok i think thats how we all wanted it to end. i love it and it makes release for us to really say... YEAY!