   dragonflame6 2008-08-17 . chapter 12squee? |
| maggierg09 2008-07-23 . chapter 12 So I'm guessing that since it's been three and a half years you've given up on that epilogue chapter. Nevertheless, I really liked this story - your writing is very polished and you didn't rush the romance, which meant that you gave your plot time to develop. Good job. |
 shadowstorm13 2008-04-29 . chapter 12good story ty for writing |
 Symmie 2007-10-25 . chapter 12I loved this story, it was great. One of the best I have read, I think. (: |
| Aly 2007-07-12 . chapter 7 that was SO AWESOME! i love the part where neal and alanna are yelling at each other! its so funny. and yeah, they had the goddess, but is the Chamber equal to it? :fav line: Oh, by the way, while you were preaching to me, did you stop to consider that you did the EXACT SAME DEED WITH PRINCE JONATHON?! LOVE IT. keep writing! |
| If I was a. fried pickle-sm7 2007-06-12 . chapter 8 Michelle Branch Everywhere would be a perfect song to go with this amazin fic! It is so Freakin AWSOME! |
 seekerchick06 2007-03-09 . chapter 12loves! Shall i continue with the ! ? I think i shall. !Is there a sequel? |
| Annette 2006-12-10 . chapter 9 hello, i have just started to be reading your stories, and i love them, particularly this. i live in Paris and go to an international school there and my friend how used to lived in England told me about Tamora Peirce and but i like George best i am also amoureuse de Neal (cannot say in English). but i think that you must keep writing. You have very much Talent. (sorry my English writing is not good, French, Spanish and Arabic are easier. You speak very strangely rb)why must evey one bring Dom into these stories and make them more dificile? Quelle triste! Mais c'est la vie. It is very good, keep writing i will be waiting here in France for your next story.
Felicitation,
Bisoux Annie |
| hubba.0.bubba 2006-02-27 . chapter 12 LOVE IT!
MORE PLEASE MAYBE EVEN A SEQUEL! |
 Mrs. Dom Masbolle 2006-02-26 . chapter 12OMG! I LOVE FLUFF! AND ALL THE THINGS YOU HAD NEAL SAY ABOUT FRIENDSHP IN PREVIOUS CHAPTERS! I WAS GETTING TEARY EYED!! YOU EITHER NEED MORE FLUFFY CHAPTERS OR A SEQUEL! I LOVE FLUFF! |
| nealandkel4eva 2006-02-22 . chapter 12 interesting... but what happened to yuki? |
| NaOmI 2006-01-26 . chapter 12 ur story is soo cool! but that last chapter...u NEARLY went over the edge with the fluff...nearly..but not completely(which IS a good thing!) can u just keep on writing? i mean like more chapters more writing...u dont have 2 finish there...I WANT MORE!! hehe(i no..that sounds really weird!)ok...well...if ur 2 lazy 2 write more(trust me i dont blame u!i can hardly B bothered finishing a chapter!)then can u @ least write a really long epilogue??plz ? thanx so much if u do!!
NaOmI
P.S.ur an AMAZING author!! |
| Black Emerald Dawn 2005-12-02 . chapter 12 This is wonderful! Very awesome KelNeal fic! Beautiful! Can't wait to read the epilogue! |
| darkakane 2005-11-13 . chapter 12 MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! Please? Pretty Please? Really want to see what else happens. It's great! I love KEL NEAL stories. Absalutely love them! |
| pretzel.in.an.egg 2005-10-20 . chapter 12 whatever happened to the epilogue chappie? ~^_^~
very nice, fluffy fic! had some slightly boring moments, but we were warned in your A/Ns! very good! and i like your loey/ tobe idea... i think i'll go read that one now... ~^_^~ |
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