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| Angry Girl 2007-10-19 ch 1,  | abuseI was so swallowed by this story it was deep and I was thinking of all the situations from his point of few and then you with the line at the end had to send me into a laughter fit :P lol so like him! hehe well done *adds to faves* |
| azn_guy108 2006-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was beautiful and so like him to do something like that. |
| Fade to Black 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abuseAw, words can't even begin to describe how much I loved reading this. There were so many parts that felt so... real I guess. It was beautiful and I enjoyed the little twist of humour at the end. Fade to Black |
| Demented Koneko 2004-07-17 ch 1, | abuseHehe, short and sweet. ^_^ |
| Verna-S 2004-05-10 ch 1, | abuseLOL! This was hilarious. I really liked the punchline at the end there. "Let go of that ring!" Silly nii-chan. |
| emii sakano 2004-03-26 ch 1, | abuseo.0 :is laughing helplessly: and here i was expecting something sad and au-ish! mou, tam-chan wa sugei! |
| SibylSofiana 2004-02-14 ch 1, | abuseHi! I really liked this story. It started out all angsty, but I didn’t expect the humorous ending. The great thing about the way you write is that you really manage to bring out a characteristic of the CCS characters (or a common thread) that isn’t exactly obvious. When you point it out, it’s like “wow, I didn’t think of that! |
| Peacewish 2004-02-05 ch 1, | abuseAnd finally I can review this. Waah, so beautiful! I just love melodramatic one-shots that feature touya, he's so perfect! I was getting all sniffly by the middle... goodbye to magic, goodbye to childhood... so sad- And then you wrapped it up with that exchange by the altar, and I burst out laughing. So unexpected! I loved it! 'let go of that ring'. My boss came in right when I read that and I had to close down the site before he could see what I was reading. I'd really rather my socialist coworkers didn't catch a glimpse of this site, or they might be nosy enough to find my stories on it. They're all commies. OOps, this is about you. Good story. I would review your latest on J in the M now, but my Thai tutor just showed so I've got to go practice my verbs. Later, I promise. |
| Laurus Nobilis 2004-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was *so* adorable! ^_^ I really liked how you handled his PoV, it was truly well done. And the ending was *perfect*. |
| L-chan 2004-01-29 ch 1, | abuse(I think my first review got eaten by the evil "server not found" monster, so I'm trying to remember what I said...) Okay, so... Wow. I don't think "perfect" is a strong enough word, but it's all I've got. Touya's life really is just a series of goodbyes, and tying them all together like that, well... as usual, I'm just in awe of your talent. And jealous. Very, very jealous. ^_^ |
| butterflydreaming 2004-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe last line! It made the whole thing! Ah, a good fun laugh, to balance such contemplations. The parting scene with K was... it made me sympathetic to her for the first time. |
| ArigatoKarateBaby 2004-01-29 ch 1, | abuseaww...that was Kawaii...^_^ *tear* Usagi-chan^_^ |
| brokenAngelYue 2004-01-28 ch 1, | abuseAw! Too cute! Poor Touya, feeling like he's losing so much. I wouldn't let go of the ring either in his perspective. ^^ |
| Askani Blue 2004-01-28 ch 1, | abuseLOL! That was great. The end was the best part. Beautiful. This was worth waiting for a tag. |
| Larania Drake 2004-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuse*giggles* Cute! VERY CUTE! and I can't say anything good. |