hey kiran its a really nice poem! did u write it urself?

What? A Harry/Hermione shipper? Eww! Eww!

Ron and Hermione are meant to be, so there!

Eww! Harry/Hermione! Ew (by the way, I added like a million w's at the end of that eww)!

EW!

-Celestial Night

(EW!)

This is good. I don't know much about Inuyasha except the 1st graphic novel (so far) and the couple of episodes of Inuyasha I saw in Japan a few years back.
I don't know why alot of people don't seem to like Kikyo. I think she's purty cool.
Oh yeah, off the subject, sorry! ^^;
This was good w/a touch of angst!

Kiran...not bad. Pretty much perfect except that you don't leave a space between a word and a question mark. I liked the sense of writing...but you know that I know nothing of Inuyasha.
Tootles,
Celestial Night

WoW! ^_^ Very nicely written!! Although i am a huge inukag fan. But none the less, its better than i could probably do!! -_^;;

Well, this was good :D. Finally something about Kikyou. I lover her. She's so cool :D. But anway, this was really good, and it captured Inuyasha's emotions. Nice :D
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~*Wakadori Ramen*~
P.S.
May you please read my story(/ies)? I hope you like Sess/Rin :D

Aww, InuYasha has a soft side! *smile* I like his soft side.
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Anywho, good poem, I like how you said 'I longed for your touch, your kiss, your love.'
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So sweet!