OMG! I READ EVERY SINGLE "TUNA" FANFIC ON THIS WEBSITE AND YOURS WAS THE BEST! I SUBMITTED A FEW REVIEWS ALREADY BUT I JUST HAD TO TELL YOU THAT YOUR STORY WAS DEFINATELY THE BEST OF THE "TUNA" FICS!

Yay EVEN BETTER! YIPEE! OKAY ILL STOP ANNOYING YOU NOW! YAY!

YAY SO HAPPY! *does a happy dance* okay then! wow your a great author...

sorry for the overwhelming amount of emails i will be sending in the next few minutes but OMG TIDUS CANT DISSAPEAR AGAIN! NO ITS TOO SAD! but jade died! *evil grin* heh heh mwahahahaha!

NO! MUST... KILL... JADE! MEORK! heh heh! sorry i absolutely LOVE what youre writing and i didnt wanna submit a review but um w/out givin nething away... um since it IS "tuna" um nuthins gonna happen w/ tidus and jade rite...

This was awesome!!

I liked the humor with Rikku in the beginning chapter, and I think it was good to use Yuna's fear of losing him as a subject. (I'm going to be submitting a story based on that subject, too, once my L-O-N-G 3-day wait is done. *sigh*) Anyway, my favorite part of the story was Yuna's line to Tidus about her presence being a dream. There is so much irony in that -- excellent word choices for that scene. I also like that you put the quest in there for the characters because fluff may build feeling and atmosphere, but it doesn't tell a story. There must be a problem for there to be a plot. I liked the interaction between Paine and Rikku in the epilogue, and I thought the ending was very funny. Whether you intended it to be funny or not, I don't know, but it hit me like a punch line and I could imagine Tidus's expression. ... What could have improved? Tag words -- very common mistake, but be careful with introducing or ending quotations with action words or nouns, rather than words that apply to speech. (Grammar rule that most English teachers for some reason NEVER teach!) I liked the glimpse of Tidus's ego in ch 8 when he caught her staring at him, but there were times when I felt he was a bit OOC -- too good to be true and very calm. Tidus is actually a bit of an immature brat in the games, but in a fun and well-meaning way. ;) Paine and Rikku had their moments being OOC with the Gippal-thing. I think it was the language -- I could see Paine cursing and shoving a fist through a wall if pushed, but cursing didn't seem to fit Rikku at all. Baralai's injuries could have been expanded on more since he was in such critical condition one minute, but fine the next. In the game, the characters learned how to use healing magic. Healing magic could have been used to explain his quick recovery. Finally, Yuna's jealousy seemed a bit OOC to me, and there wasn't enough information or time given to Jade, so she was a rather 2-dimensional villain. Pitting Yuna against jealousy is an excellent idea to challenge her character; it just felt like it was missing something. Overall, it was a very easy read, and I was able to stick with it in one sitting. :)

Aw...(takes breath)...w...(pants heavily before continuing)...w! So cute! You really need to make a sequel. I like TidusxYuna fluff, and SoraxKairi fluff in Kingdom Hearts. It's just so..."politically accurate." Ha, my 6th grade Social Studies teacher said that. Dammit, why did she have to go and retire?! Now I can't see her in the hallway before class! (Sob) No, I'm not gay. She was just a sweet and funny old lady who taught Social Studies. OK, that was REALLY off. BTW, I HATE that Yaoi and Yuri stuff. It's just...creepy, and that's an understatement. Well, at least you got a long review! And I say again, GOOD STORY!
^_^'

~Moogle Girl

*sniffs* that was so cute!

that was so cute! and so perfect! ^_^ i loved it!

poor rikku. loved the chapter!

i love the fluff ^_^ as for the gippal/rikku thing. i just love that type of stuff, the fact that he teases her and she responds to it, its just kinda cute ^_^ but anyway,love the story!

bless her having to go on another mission, lol. hope shes succeeds!

that was so cute ^_^ bless her she does deserve to be happy

love it so far ^_^ don't blame yuna for being concerned bless her.