This is really good. I didn't really get the end. But if you update it might make more sense.

Oh...oh wow..that is creepy...are you going to do anything with this? i hope you do

Eek!! This is a fantastic beginning, and I'll be very happy if you ever get around to updating it ^^

Whoa. I really want to read what happens next. You've got to continue this.

Whoa... I don't know about you, but I definitely thought that that was freakin freaky! I mean... isn't that sorta place for the dead or something? Well... it was still freakin freaky...! *Shudders*

wow...

Aha... a nice ending, that.

lovely.

One vote for continuing! Very inticing.

...Im speechless. Poor InuYasha..what happened to him?? Mean ol Sesshomaru

As usual, your brilliance shines brightly on FFN

what the...
dude that was awesome!! you continue this and make a short story or something out of it.
But i don't get the 'John Doe' thing...

DAMN. that is creepy as HELL. im claustraphobic too and i was freaking out just reading it. good job. freak me out more please and update soon.

o.0 i like it...def creepy ^ ^ id love to see you continue this!

~ChIbI

Ooh... I think the request in this review should be obvious, but please, write more! It sounds very interesting... and the cliffhanger at the end is rather steep. Keep going!

Wow. That was really good. I just though i would congradulate you! ;)