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Reviews for: Hiding Place
drummer 14
2007-02-15 . chapter 1
okay it was wierd but cool, never thought about Gaara and Jiraiya, or naruto. wierd
MysteryLady-Tx
2006-04-23 . chapter 1
interseting interseting...

NEVER had I seen this particular umcouple...3some...

THANKS:D I liked it
MurreMurmel
2006-04-16 . chapter 1
Nice! ^.^
CuteCrittersGang
2006-03-06 . chapter 1
OMG, this story is AWESOME! When I saw the pairing, I was like: "0.o WTF?!" But then I read the story, and now . . . (waves GaaraJiraiyaNaruto flag) WOOTS FOR THREESOMES! I really liked that Naruto was so nonchalant about his mentor and boyfriend kissing. It was hilarious how he was all: "Hey! Don't forget to breathe over there!" Lol. But yeah. This was a really cute one-shot, despite (or maybe because of?) the angst. I salute thee.
*Tom*
blisblop
2005-04-11 . chapter 1
If I have not reveiwed this before then it wil be uhh...news of some sort that I think this is really slick,I love kids over-sexing bigger kids so this is just a joy to read.I like Jiraiya alot too so to read him with Gaara is a real kinda great-brain-freeze.
Under the Oak Tree
2004-11-23 . chapter 1
That was just. . .so WRONG. . .and so RIGHT. Crap, I'm going wtf (?) as well while liking this little ficlet extremely.

I have been corrupted.

Cheers,
The Oak Tree
PinkyLemon
2004-04-18 . chapter 1
Yay! I really liked this one a lot, too. Good job! Do more Gaara/Jiraiya/Naruto! Please?!
Lasaire
2004-02-03 . chapter 1
Hehehe, Jiraiya cracks me up everytime he's onscreen. And while I can't really imagine Gaara ever being up for a sammich, the mental image is really nice. Plus, Foxy!Naruto is always good.
Kleptomaniac Can Opener
2004-01-30 . chapter 1
Narf! That was so...nifty!
I wanna read more of this! Could you write more? Please? Pretty pretty please?
=^_^=
MEOW!
gelfling
2004-01-29 . chapter 1
Eyah!
I expected a lot of things, this was not one of them.
Jiraiya...that could SO happen! I love Gaara! He's so cool! And the OroJira-ness...wow. WOw. It's so pretty. This was a wonderful fic, I hope you do more like this soon. This was just...EK! Great.
Shisou
2004-01-29 . chapter 1
Wonderful! Well written. I love your wordplay and you make this threesome seem *right.* Much like! ^_^
--NC--
2004-01-29 . chapter 1
Ne...you should do more of this. o.o I'm...intrigued...now. (And yeah...it's kinda scary how much Jiraiya and Naruto are alike. ^^) Heh. Not bad, not bad...*uses Spork of Destruction to poke*...more, ne? Ne?
ellonen
2004-01-29 . chapter 1
Wow. Seriously weird. And nice, too. I'm pretty dumbfounded, because I began to read this thinking that it would be Gaara and Jiraya to fall for Naruto, not Gaara and Naruto fall for the Pervert Sennin. *blinks* But, as all of your stories, truly amazing job on the characters, the development and everything between the first and last sentence. The beginning was pretty weird, and I guess the ending was slightly weird too... Well, the middle was weird, too. So, overall, weird but wonderful.
I figure it's alright to leave it to this for the time being.
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