I came here to return a favor, since you reviewed one of my fics and I liked the summary of this. ::applauds:: You did a really great job on this, I like the detail and Snape's reaction. And it's kind of ironic that a castle as big as Hogwarts is too small, but I like that you added it in. And I love the last bit.

"Miss Granger, this must not happen again." He looked at her sternly.

"No, sir." Not until the next time, anyway, she thought to herself.

All in all, good job and keep it up! :)

Nice twist at the end. I loved the peacefulness you created in this story. Also, I like the touch of humanity you gave Severus. Way to go!

Cute! It expresses the feeling we all have every once in a while so well! It's short, but that might also be where it's power lies

Good idea. It made me smile for the first time this morning.

Thanks for sharing.

Randi

Very cute! .. I like how you've portrayed Snape in both of your shorter fics. You are definitely a good writer! I am going to go read the summer one now!

Cute. I do feel so sorry for Hermione... no one really pays much attention to her. Good job!

It was great. Very calm. Short, but what you didn't say is what gives the most power. See what I mean? Anyway, even if you don't , I still think it's great! :)