'End Part One'! Where's Part Two?! It's really good! Please update!!

Wow! Refreshing to come across something that is both interesting AND well-written. I really like your portrayal of Brian's cutting (antibacterial cream and gauze? how nerdy!). I think it does fit his character. I love the flare gun mishap, it's a very fitting explanation. I know that it's been over a year since you posted, but I hope you still read your reviews, and I hope you still consider this story as finishable. Or at least continuable. Meanwhile, I guess I'll just have to wade through your other fics, because no matter what they're about, they've got to be good.

FINISH IT!

Are you going to continue on with this?
Lately I've been falling out fanfiction, because FFN is a bunch of anal bastards and most fics are badly written/dorky (even my own) but this one was really good. I love the way that you portrayed things.

Whee, I'm glad I didn't quit after slogging through the first page of Breakfast Club fanfiction... I was about ready to quit, but then I ran across this...

Lovely writing, disturbed nerdlove, general all-round goodness.

Cutting does seem out of character to me, though... I couldn't tell you why, exactly, but it seems a little off. The characterization still works, though. Yay for you.

-AC

Wow. I am so, incredibly impressed. This story was beautifully written. My power went off while I was reading it, and I nearly had a spaz attack trying to get it back on so I could finish. Write more, please!

Oh! Wow! This is great! I don't usually read 'The Breakfast Club' fanfiction, but I was bored today. Your fic has made me realize my mistake, though. I really should read more BC fanfiction! I really hope you decide to continue this, it's extremely interesting, and I adore the way you write Brian. I really wanna see how your other characters are. What I like most, though, is that Brian already has his "problems", and how he cuts. I don't know why, but I love stories that show a darker side to a character thought to be pretty normal. And you do a great job! Well, hope to see more!

Is Brian your favourite character? I've isolated a phenomenon I call The Breakfast Club syndrome, whereby a film's charcters are so diverse, they pretty much cover the entire spectrum, and as a result, I often relate to a different character most each time I watch it, depending on my mood and situation. Anyway, you've got an excellent grasp of his charcater. Was Mussollini always nuts about grades and ** for you? Was my Dani an academic overachiever? Miss ya.

Very good, Schiz. Poor Brian! Such terrible pressure. (The flare gun, heh) Can't wait to see what happens next!