I like where you're going with the story. It's different from the other graduation stories here and seems quite personal at times which gives the story a sense of realism. There aren't many reviews yet, but you definitely have my support.

This reminds me of a fanfic on called "The Darker Shades of Green." Where Saionji did keep a diary. You should read it, it's very good.

This fanfic is good, and it needs more reviews then it has. Keep up the great work.

First Utena fic I've read, and I absolutely loved it. You're going on my favorites.

[happy sigh] You transcribe Gackt, write amazing GW fiction...and now you are at utenadrabble ^_^
This was lovely. I have become, over time, a huge Saionji fan--especially in the matter of his relationship with Touga (however you may see it as one...) Besides that, your firsthand knowledge of Japan just makes me swoon--and that Saionji would want to be a writer, I think, is perfection.

It's absolutely criminal that no one has reviewed this story yet, especially since you have more talent than most fic writers on ffnet.
I like how in spite of the changes, much of Saionji's character was intact. He's still a bit of a loner for instance.
You have this interesting style where the surface of the story seems casual and everyday enough but as it progresses, there is this subtle, disturbing undercurrent going on.