 Mitsuru Aki 2007-03-28 . chapter 1I liked this one...and you're right, there was some sap, but its nice to have Heero think about something other than the missions for once. It's really sweet. And they're not as OOC as you think they are. It just depends on the situation. Cus as Duo said, they're only human, despite their attempts to the contrary. |
 Gleep 2004-10-17 . chapter 1 Ohh, 1x5x1, my favourite! Not a lot of it out there, never mind mostly IC ones. I like it when they get rough with each other, that's why I adore this pairing, because it's hard to see them any other way, isn't it?
To think that I'd find a good 1x5 in this godforsaken place. I don't usually hang around here, actually I was looking for a very cluchée 1x2 fic that I and my friend could make fun of (since this place is infamous for the amount of really lousy GW fanfiction), but I stopped somewhere in the middle and decided to check if there was any 1x5 around here. Good thing I did.
I like the backflashed of how their relationship started, and the very forced conversation over the phone. It was sweet, in a very un-sappy way. :) And I don't think it was too OOC, you made a good job of pointing out their social ineptness, and unwillingness to admit to having any such feelings. In fact, Wufeis angry self-depreciation over the fact that he wanted to hear Heero's voice, life a love-sick puppy, was adorable.
Hope you'll be writing more 1x5:s! |