Love this story, but will you PLESE update? I looked at the 'last update' thing and it siad 4-7-04. It's almost 06 darn it! Don't think I'm being mean or anything, it's just that when I really like a fic, I want updates ASAP.

You're doing another one! YAY! I'm so hapy! *tackles Ai Yuukan* Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!
Wah! Can't wait for more! :D

YAY!! Update!! :D ...sorry, I should be in the middle of telling you how cool this chapter was...*ahem* But anyway, this chapter WAS great and I'm looking forward to the next one! Update soon!

WOW! SO GOOD! ^^ can't wait till da next chappy ^^

Is it long enough? Maybe you should split your stories into chapters or not write any at all.

Aw man! This is neat what you're doing. I mean doing the whole story from each girls' perspective. You really should keep this all up. ^ ^
I have a bit of advice though...Umm...I get confused having to read all of the different characters' chats. You should break up the conversations like what you did in this story. In Viven's story, you kinda' had it all jumbled up together.
*shrugs* Just a suggestion.
Puh-lease write some more!!
~Amanda