Whahh.
Dark, apathetic, and very well written. Scary.
Good job. :)

wow...I had not read this when it was first posted...in fact I was on darksarcasm and hit the random link...it was awesome...I can't wait to read the sequel...please don't forget to write it...It would be interesting to read a story where SNape is training Hermione to get her revenge, and then one of them moving on afterwards...maybe a life together.

Too short! Ack! Hope you write more soon. :) This was a great story (aside from the shortness, of course), and I'd like to read more. Keep writin'!
~Lisa

too...much...suspense...

aw, come on. don't tell me that she killed severus. how will they ever get married now? (jk) :)

fascinating. you've captured my interest so far.

You are a very good writer. This is amazing. Please continue!

Aw, Snape apologized...How sweet! I just LUV him!

Let me just say first that your descriptions and word usage are well above average for a fanfic. I did note some minor comma things, and I sent those to you in email form. I really hope you continue this. And as another reviewer wondered: How much of his memory does she take? That would be a plot twist. In her emotional state, can she really control a spell like that? Hmm.

Who says obliviate? And to whom?

You write well. It's too soon to even begin to guess what your plot is, but I will read more.

This has the chance of being really, really good. I can't wait to see where you take it.

This is wonderful. There are so many possibilities. What a great start.

I can't wait to see if she does it right or if how much memory she takes away. Ready to read more :-)

Certainly an interesting beginning, and I am looking forward to seeing where you go from here.