oh wow. very powerful and well written. i like how you turned the story of snape's rescue into a sort of...realization for james on how lily feels. neat!

Hmm... interesting interpretation. Good one, too. I especially like James intoning that murder is against the law, even for Blacks, before he realizes just how close to the truth he is. I also like James' realization at the end, that Lily might be right about their feud. Over all, you did a nice job with this.

i read this a while ago, but i never reviewed, so i am now. that was really great. you wrote them how i imagine they'd react. i especially like the end.

whe...that was a gr8 1. leave it on here, it has good meaning.