kool story :)
please kill tea and yumi yugi *puppy eye*
and let marik and bkura live ;)

Aah! YOU MUST UPDATE. MUST.

It's been months, but maybe you're hoarding chapters as a certain authoress *coughs* Adelianna! *coughs* has been doing.

'Twould truly be a shame to let the plot bunny fade.

Hey great story I like it !

O_O OMBOB!
Yami: O_O OMRA!
Malik: O_O OMOSiRiUS!
Bakura: =__= wut the hell is wrong with u guys?
everyone: ::stares at Bakura::
Bakura: ._. wut?
everyone: -_-''
^__^; newaiz...^__^ ARE U KiDDiNG!? X3 I LURVE MARIK/TEA! XDD fwahahhaH!...wait...actually, wut couple iS it? o.o; haha.
Bakura: X__X BAKA!
=_=; shaddup..
6_9; newaiz, MORE PEAZ! X3 reeaall interesting. XD haha. make Marik, like, put her in this "mind game" thing where he's like all bein perverted and horny at her. XDD RUN, TEA, RUN! XD FWhaahhahaHahaH!
Yami: ._. if you're wondering, no, Black Mistress is NOT a Tea basher. ^^;
^_^ MORE PEAZ!

Good job! Keep up the good work, and update soons!
Mokubaz-Angel*-*

It's a great, wonderful story! And everyone's in character! Your story is suspensful, and the plot is amazing! I hope it's Marik/Téa. I'm a sucker for that couple. You did spell a few names wrong, though:
Tristian real spelling is Tristan
Seto Kiabia real spelling Seto Kaiba
Mokumba is actually spelled Mokuba
And Bakora is really spelled Bakura
Anyway, you are a wonderful writer and I just love it! Please continue!
*~*Adelianna