I liked this the first time and it's even better the second time. Keep up the good work.

not a bad story. could you continue it please?

hm, very nice...

HP, Draco and Jewel - what a combination! I really liked this :o)

There is so much depth to this!! Of course you can take it on the surface level, but I can think of at least 3 other metaphors for the story... Wow, Nice work :)

THAT"S A SONG FROM JEWEL???? oh wow lol didn't know she wrote stuff like that- well I liked the story

Very nice. I've never heard that sond bofore, but it fits really well.

Hey cool, I really liked this fic a lot. I thought it was really cool the way you added new a character and didn't make the fic seem to "Mushy-mushy." I also think that you didn't mess up the whole Draco abuse thing like people are doing now. *hey, can u r/r my fanfic?* :P

That was very deep. Powerful and touching. You convey very strong emotions with your writing. Fantastically written, though you could have described the emotions a touch more. The song fit nicely. Very well done.

Did this actually have a plot?

This is very good - well written, but you need a beta reader to catch the little mistakes like the spelling of "feminine" and "a swig from the goblet" and a few others I noticed.

Poor Draco. Nice song fic.

Kool version of a Draco hate Lucius fic. Most people have Draco go onto the good side to defeat Lucius but you have it the other way around. This fits Draco's character better, even if there are rumour of Jk Rowling putting Draco and Harry in a situation where they work together.

Great story... made better by the fact that I was listening to the song while I read it. Bravo!

Very Impressive. It held me to the end. Exceptional talent here.