GAH! Ari and Kirin are my FAVORITE garg paring. OF ALL TIME! :D I love this story, and the little Japanese words throw in here and there made it that much cooler (I love the culture and have friends from there). thank you UBER MUCH for writing! :D

You have written an enchantingly engaging fantasy... I am truly enchanted by your words and cleverness. I will be in quite sorrow if there won't be a continuation. There is so much to know in life.

Ariana-chan was so mean to Kirin. I mean, blackmailing him with pocky! How heartless could you get?

How much of a age gap is there between Ari-chan and Kirin-san?

I heard Tengu was good, and all those people were right!
Kirin's a real stiff, but you just gotta love 'im.

Wow
Absolutely stunning, amazing, wonderful story! I was captivated by each sentence - no! Each -word-!

Your characterization was on spot with everything I know of the Gargoyles Series and your original additions were so beautifully created, so intense, so in-depth that I could swear that they were created by Greg Weisman himself.

Kudos. Amazing story and absolutely beautiful presentation. Your writing voice is so clear and collective that I could not draw myself away.

Great work!

Wow, I haven't read a gargoyles fic in a LONG time... but what a great pick-me-up! :D Couldn't stop reading for a moment! I'd forgotten how much I loved the series.

Fantastic work! Have to go back, read the Time Dancer series and all of your other works. Thank you so much for writing such a great story!

omg i love your fics there so awesome plz continue

Wow, great fic! Loved the interaction between Kirin, Ari and the Three. BTW, the Japanese term for older sister is 'onee-san', 'onii-san' is male only. Any chance of a sequel?

I am not one much for reading fanfiction with OC characters...However, I'm going to have to make an exception on this one. If I had never watched the TV series, I wouldn't have known any better.

Marvelous writing, edge-of-my-seat cliffhangers (You vile wench!), your excellent grasp on the Japanese culture and ... the main couple. I cannot express my love of them in words and all I can say is:

OMG YOU EFFIN' RULE! I fell in love with the story the moment I started reading. The depth of the characters the situtions the LOVE! You are truly a talented writer and I must say, your art is like your writing: FREAKING AWESOME! I love it when the two of them were at the springs and the love that was shown. I loved it!

AWESOME FIC! I just started getting back into my gargoyle phase with my friend lending me season one and vol.1 of season two, i am having an absolute blast! i can't wait to read the rest of your work and that fanart by bri-chan helps add so much more as far as imagery goes. Lovely writing!

What a wonderful story. I really need to find out about Brooklyn's traveling days someday though... Keep up the good work, dark

While the other fic focuses on her brother, guess it's only fair Ari gets her turn to shine in here. And she's quite the character indeed.
There's also that difference in character the twins have that separates them from the rest of their clan. They're much more into the human world than their elders were, probably given the circumstances and time they were raised in. That's one of the things that really interests me.

The story is so well butilt up how Ari and Kirin's relationship starts off (And their first meeting was very amusing, no doubt). Both seem so similar in their feelings, but for different reasons.

I notice how the three guys start rushing for Ari much in the same way the Trio first started competing for Angela. Must be quite a bad thing for them not having any females around.
And the amusing bits at different points were certainly good too.

Great one overall!

I really enjoyed this story. You are a very good writer. I hope to read more of your work X3

I loved this story, it was well written and the character where wonderful. Your skilled at playing out relationships and I really adore that. Kirin is a wonderful character and I really like him. I can't wait to read the next stories.