omg i love your fics there so awesome plz continue

Wow, great fic! Loved the interaction between Kirin, Ari and the Three. BTW, the Japanese term for older sister is 'onee-san', 'onii-san' is male only. Any chance of a sequel?

I am not one much for reading fanfiction with OC characters...However, I'm going to have to make an exception on this one. If I had never watched the TV series, I wouldn't have known any better.

Marvelous writing, edge-of-my-seat cliffhangers (You vile wench!), your excellent grasp on the Japanese culture and ... the main couple. I cannot express my love of them in words and all I can say is:

OMG YOU EFFIN' RULE! I fell in love with the story the moment I started reading. The depth of the characters the situtions the LOVE! You are truly a talented writer and I must say, your art is like your writing: FREAKING AWESOME! I love it when the two of them were at the springs and the love that was shown. I loved it!

AWESOME FIC! I just started getting back into my gargoyle phase with my friend lending me season one and vol.1 of season two, i am having an absolute blast! i can't wait to read the rest of your work and that fanart by bri-chan helps add so much more as far as imagery goes. Lovely writing!

What a wonderful story. I really need to find out about Brooklyn's traveling days someday though... Keep up the good work, dark

While the other fic focuses on her brother, guess it's only fair Ari gets her turn to shine in here. And she's quite the character indeed.
There's also that difference in character the twins have that separates them from the rest of their clan. They're much more into the human world than their elders were, probably given the circumstances and time they were raised in. That's one of the things that really interests me.

The story is so well butilt up how Ari and Kirin's relationship starts off (And their first meeting was very amusing, no doubt). Both seem so similar in their feelings, but for different reasons.

I notice how the three guys start rushing for Ari much in the same way the Trio first started competing for Angela. Must be quite a bad thing for them not having any females around.
And the amusing bits at different points were certainly good too.

Great one overall!

I really enjoyed this story. You are a very good writer. I hope to read more of your work X3

I loved this story, it was well written and the character where wonderful. Your skilled at playing out relationships and I really adore that. Kirin is a wonderful character and I really like him. I can't wait to read the next stories.

Lovely so far, I love the way you've built the characters.
I have one teensy problem.
Onii-chan/san is 'brother.' The chan doesn't indicate femenine, and calling a brother onii-chan makes it a teasing thing. Onee-chan/san is sister. For anyone who doesn't take japanese seriously when reading/writing fics, no problem. But you seem to have a major grasp of the culture, and that kind of mistake kind of ruins your credibility. Otherwise, outstanding writing, I shall continue to read.
Peace,
Fawx.

Voundivar!! simple put (meaning= wonderful) I loved the pictures on deviant art of this pair and just had to get the story behind it, I'll look into anymore fanfics I can find about them, because it was all just so cute ^ ^

He is perhaps twenty years older than her. He is an arrogant, overbearing, obnoxious **. When they first met, he tried to kill her. Eight years before that, he had been having many illicit affairs with "married women". Now, did I miss anything? Oh, yeah. His first wife left him after he asked his buddy to knock her up cause he couldn't get the job done himself.

Yet inspite of all this, she accepted him, why?

Perhaps, Miss Hayden, You can tell me what Ariana sees in Kirin.

Konnichiwa! Bokura no Ookami Ede desu!

LOL, there, I just showed off my Japanese. Okay, back to the subject:

I know you because you're one of the writers of TGS. Plus, I'm close to Demona Taína, so I should know.

Anyways, I loved this one till the very end. Everything was so beautiful tears formed (no, really), plus you really made my day with Jane Eyre:

Kirin+Rochester= An extremely good metaphor/personification. I loved everything. Congrats, please keep it up, and write more AGargs for my soul.

I don't know why, but I remember I inspired myself to write my very first TRUE fanfic, which turned out, as expected, to be of Gargs. I was a complete disaster-possibly even worse than anyone. However, after reading your fics at TGS and some others, I improved my work, and now it's something not even I can believe.

Once again, thanks for your time reading this LONG (lol) review. PLease keep it up!

~WEU

It's been so many years since I've seen the Gargoyles - even then I was young, I think it was hard to get into. However, I was drawn to this fic having seen your pictures on deviant art (as well as some of Bri-chan's fanart) and I fell in love with the characters and just had to read the fiction.

I was certainly not disappointed.

This is a stunning story. I've had a problem in recent years with just sitting down and reading fiction, but I spent all day on this story. It just sucked me in from the beginning. It was complex without being overlly so, meaning I found it easy to follow with a few breaks to let it all sink in.

You have a wonderful talent of making the story sweep people along. My heart seemed to soar with Ariana's, the fifth chapter had me in tears and the epilogue just made me smile so much that my face ached. I think this is one of the best things I have read all year, I thank you for sharing it with us.

I also want to shamelessly beg that someday there is more with Kirin and Ariana.

"It's been three years, oniichan –" If Ariana is Graeme's sister, it would be onee- rather than onii-chan. That and they're probably too close for the o- honorific prefix. And the old gargoyle should be ojii- rather than simply oji-san (uncle).

My cheers to Midori for dumping on those **.

"...going to be (too) busy to notice I'm gone!"

SHE KNOWS ARNIS? WHA-HAY!

"...he pounced on her like (a) great cat."

"You gave them quite a lesson in over- (under-) estimating their opponent."

"Ariana could see the self-depreciating (deprecating) scorn evident there."

All in all, interesting.