I love your story! Great job, and I can see it all happening. I love how you picked up where the movie left off.

I don't think your writing skills suck. I really enjoyed this story :)

Thanks!

That was so good! I absolutely loved that ending! It was perfect. There aren't many Willard fanfics out there and I think this is one of the better ones. Nicely done, I really enjoyed it!

PiG

I like this! I enjoyed that you picked it up right where the movie left off... It was almost kind of like having a sequel! Also, I like Insane asylum stories- for some reason, there is an appeal there (um...) But yeah, nice work!

That bitch is SO dead . . . LOL

Great story.

Pleas make some moe chapters please.

I think this story is great. I've always fancied insane asylum stories and films. This does the movie justice. I keep reading it over and over. It's great. Keep up the good work. You ought to write more.

Great job! I really like the idea of this story. Keep up the good work!

Good job, Xeno! This is good, even for the "non fanficer" that you are. And this was 'acceptable' to me, a non fan ficer, so that is a compliment. You stayed pretty faithful to Willard, which is good. :) There were lots of creative details, and many events you put in that I liked (the picture on the desk, etc) I mostly enjoyed the detail and vivid images you put forth...I could 'see' Willard doing most of the stuff! Curling into a ball! Creative...it brought a smile to my face several times thinking of Willard. Also, there were things included, like his unfortunate drug induced state, that made it seem more realistic and interesting. Yes, there were some 'holes' in the plot it seemed, but overall, it gets a thumbs up!

Hey!
Thanks for e-mailing me. :D I really like this story it's very dark and twisted, a good look into Willards mind.

Hey Xeno! Most excellent first chapter! Can't wait to read more. Keep 'em comin! ;)