Wow! Amazing give us more! You made Ace so much nicer then all the other people do thanks. I just love him, kiefer sutherland makes him so adorably sexy. M... more please. By the wasy, battle to the death, the softer one.

i really like it, good job, i hope you do something to that Alison bitch, I'm in a really pissed off mood tonight and would love to see some bitch's get punch spilled on their fabulous outfits or something, i love the story plot too. keep up the good work

I think it's brilliant! And Penny and Alison should battle to the death.
Anyway, keep up the awesome, lovely work, as always.

HIT HER WITH A BLOCK OF CONCRETE!!
(in eveil British voice) block 'o concrete... AH HAH HAH HA
Yes well, I'm in an Eddie Izzard mood.

hahaha oh dude, LOVE the ending XD

Gah, i hate you. (JK)
I have have been drafting Stand By Me stories for AGES now and it had the whole city girl thing in it and now I find that HAS Stand By Me andandand you STOLED it.

Evil

But fun story anyway

hey i just read your story so far and it's so freaking awesome i really really love it i'm addicted to it already please please pretty please say you'll update this soon i'm desperate to find out what happens next.

omg! please keep going...i love this story lol

Okay, I've got a long reveiw so enjoy...
first I would like to say, THANKYOU! yeahh maybe... I don't know thats wierd. =]
Second, you could take this as a compliment or not but you've got some heavy heavy heavy detail in there.
Thrird yes you need to update more often! though im one to talk i've been on here since like '03 and havent posted a story yet =]
Fourth you are totally and completely correct Ace is a man whore and just NEEDS to get laid =]
Fifth, yes, i know 50s teenagers had sex but... im not sure out in broad daylight like that but I guess we will never know for sure.
Sixth, i hope you like long reveiws.

Bye.

wow, this was a nice surprise! i was actually begining to wonder if you were going to continue or not!! i'm glad you did (even if it was a little smutty) next chapter should be intersting...hope you update sooner :D

That was really good! Glad you finally updated can't wait for more soon

YAY an update *dances*, this chapter was great I loved it.
"man-whore" oh how I love that word. :D
Ohh hard choice I'll have to choose battle to the death the one with all the exclamation marks of course, :D.
~Katyx
yay I'm so glad you updated *dances away*

this is good

Nice chap! It's very exciting and naughty -which I love by the way, lol! Hm... battle to the death or battle to the death, it's so hard to decide. So surpirse me:-)

HEYY! WOOT! I'M BACK! And you must be too! We should make that POTC fic! i made a new myspace. my email is blish75@yahoo, find me on it! I miss you! I'm off to read OA! I miss us! :)