As much as I'd LOVE there to be more, this ending is absolutely perfect. Just totally wonderful! What a great story!

Stunning. Absolutely stunning. This was so good. I even like the point in their relationship where it ended. A lot of fics have Wendy go back to Neverland but this one was so unique, having Hook come here. And we all know he also came here for her. When a girl haunts your dreams... Anyways, this was such a breath of fresh air compared to a lot of fics that have just left me unsatisfied...and this one didn't even have to end with a kiss!

Very good, but I especially liked the fact that Hook now stays up at night fully dressed and waiting for her. She saw him "naked," really, and the form-obsessed Eton man that he is probably felt he made a bad showing. I wonder what the next meeting will bring.

Darling, you have to continue these! They're so perfect, so concise and yet they speak volumes. The exchange between Hook and Wendy is so good. They're both so guarded it has a great air of suspense all around it. They don't know what the other one will do or even if the other one is real. It's such a great situation to throw them into!

Oh, this was delightful! I know this story is complete (at least for now), but I would so love to see more of it, I am fair greedy for it, thank you for sharing.

This was beautifully done; the dreamlike quality of your writing was excellently delivered, and I enjoyed the subtlety of Hook and Wendy's relationship. Thank you for sharing!

Once again, read with the quality of a dream. While it wasn't particularly emotional, it had an elegance and grace that propelled the reader smoothly to the end. It left me pensive, quiet, thoughtful, with visions of the sea.

Nicely done-- keep writing.

-Amoracia

I have read and re-read this story and it's predecessors so many times now and I am stilled enthralled every time. The depth you bring to the characters is incredible. There is nothing more I can say about it other than this is exactly how I imagine Hook and Wendy to be. Your writing style fits the mood so perfectly. It's subtle and almost fragile and very sincere. I was particularly moved when Wendy is trying to size Hook up and fails. The line about how it was easier in childhood and she was so glad to be older really seized me.
You're right about this story ending as a beginning. I feel like this fic is almost a prelude to so much more but I have no trouble imagining where things go from here. Bravo. I would love to see more work from you (especially of the Hook/Wendy variety - there are so few good writers in this fandom).

This was such a fun story! So glad I discovered your writing today. I really like the fact that you leave what happens open at the end, only hinting at the fact that theres' more when she goes back.

Nicely done. Well written and charming!
Thanks for such a treat!

Cheers!
Nytd

"With a snap,he straightened, gaining both height and hauteur in one fell swoop and he turned fromher, towards the desk."

Loved this line -it tells so much!

I really like the interaction between Wendy and Hook here!

"Stone by stone, and she could hear them fall,
clattering against the far off rocks. Grain of earth by grain of earth."

Loved this -you can almost feel the cliff edge beneath your own feet!

Nice touch of angst within Hook's musings.

" He was far too tired, and he felt
older, more alone and about as done for as any man could, and still have a beating heart."

I really liked this!

Onward!

This would have captivated me on its own, even if I hadn't read the other two vignettes. Lovely prose, and I was as fascinated as Wendy was with the encounter. Cannot wait to read the rest!

Oh come on!! I have enough on my plate already, being addicted to Harry Potter and Labyrinth and Doctor Who and heaven knows what other fics... I do *not* need to start falling in love with Wendy/Hook ones!

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But alas, obviously I did.
Brilliant story -- I think I'm off to reread it again.

I want ton know what happens next. ARGH!

Wonderfully written btw :D