great job. especially with the descriptions and stuff.
Don't you just hate it when the volume on the CD player won't go up any higher, and you need it to? :P
Seriously, great job on this. I especially loved the fluffy parts to death!!

Queen: Guess who has returned?
Queen's Yami (I forget her name ^_^;;): WHO IS IT?! WHO IS...WHOA! -trips over remote-
Queen: I've been looking for that!
Queen's Yami: So have I! Who would ever think to leave it on the floor! Hah!
Queen: ^_^; So, I hope you don't mind me returning! I'll work on your shattered fragments story, but it might take me quite a while.
Queen's Yami: Sure! ^_^ O_O -still on ground-
Queen: I have a story line about what happened to my yami. You know the one with no voice? Yeah, well she got her voice back and she's sorta a ditz.
Queen Yami: AM NOT!
Queen: -throws clicker on ground-
Queen's Yami: I GOT IT! -dives for clicker-
Queen: ^_^;; AWESOME STORY SIXES! Queen -Out!

it made me melt! that was really good keep it up!

(:I loved that story it is so cuit it made me cry. I love Sora/Kairi stories.(: s keep writing.

Oh yeah! You go girl! Man, it so hard to find SK authors now! It's always YAOI pairings and Riku/Kairi. Now that depressing cuz the main couple is so definitely SORA/KAIRI!
Ps. Thanks for reviewing my story! Keep up with your writing too!

this was so sad yet so beautiful! write another one!

That was pretty, oh I loved it. It was like you write a little piece of heaven that just made my day. aw, I'm going to cry!
~Loki ^_^

aw that was so cute! great story! ^_^

KAWAI! IM REVIEWING!
Kenshin: Yes that you are.
Queen: ...
Kenshin:...
Queen: I LIKE IT SIX!! And so does Kenshin. O_o now i must read all your other fics.
Kenshin: And forget about me...
Queen: I will never forget about you!
KEnshin: ^_^
Queen: *hugs Kenshin*
KEnshin: ^_^
Queen: Bye!
KEnshin: Sayanora Sucker!
Queen: *slaps KEnshin*
Kenshin: Owie...
Queen: Bye!
KEnshin: @__@

Good job! :-) It was such a cute story!

Aw, that's so cute! At one point, I thought Sora had died, cause he was like stalking her. Anyway, cute story.