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amortentiaaa
2007-08-09 . chapter 21
Puddlemere isn't national, btw, it's regional. And I don't think they could've been in love for 6 years since Katie is 3 years younger than Oliver. I'm so touched that Oliver cries a few times, since a lot of guys don't like crying because they're all manly and that crap... btw, how come she doesn't even know her maid of honor's name? Like she says "Mackenzie or something like that". What's that supposed to mean?

And what do you mean sorry it wasn't the greatest? That was one of the best chapters! 'Cause there was no more fighting. :P Oh wait. Now that I'm reading the last chapter... ugh, more fighting. No!

You wrote this like Nicholas Sparks would... it's okay if you don't know who he is :D The "scavenger hunt" was too sweet! I like the 13 thing.

"We'll more then likely will have enough for our own little Quidditch team" -- aww so cute! ^^ In fact, I love the whole second half of the last chapter... the happy half :) even though we know the first half was necessary. The mini-epilogue was amazing. ^.^
Star-Girl11235
2007-07-23 . chapter 21
I AM HOOKED! I AM GOING ON TO READ THE ONESHOT RIGHT NOW!!
Blonde Babe
2007-07-09 . chapter 8
okay i dont know why, but this chspter reminded me of alladin. it was cute
fantasygirl26
2007-06-13 . chapter 21
WOW I loved it! i love oliver and katie stories and I absolutely loved this one...i laughed and cried and laughed. wow!
The Golfer
2007-03-09 . chapter 21
great story!
EllaMuffin
2007-02-20 . chapter 21
BRILLIANT, BRILLIANT, BRILLIANT!

I adored it.

Wonderful!

Hahaha. =)
lilangelxox
2006-06-26 . chapter 21
Beautifully written story! Look foward to reading more of your work.
Valterra
2005-09-18 . chapter 5
Mmkay, so - I read this story awhile ago xD I thought it was great, though, I had one criticism...

I don't like the way Alicia and Angelina are acting in this chapter or the last.

Why the hell does Katie have to apologize to them just because she doesn't share their opinion that Oliver is the perfect guy for her? Hell, he sleeps with a new girl practically every night, and they expect her to believe he's her dream guy?

Nu uh.

Trying to hook you up with someone who only wants to use you for a ** and then brush you aside would not be classified as 'trying to help' in my opinion. It's pretty hard to imagine someone who has slept with half of the population of girls at Hogwarts being able to commit to one person.

Seeing as you wrote this about a year ago, maybe consider going back through and spacing this story for an easier read?
FizzingWhizbeez(not logged in)
2005-08-26 . chapter 21
Aww that was so sweet! I especially loved the ending. Great job!
Serendipiti3
2005-06-24 . chapter 21
very sweet and touching =]
SashaBT245
2005-06-02 . chapter 21
i've been reading your other fic, who do you love, and i saw this on the list, and had to read it, cause i'm a sucker for oliver wood stories...this story was so touching, and so sweet, i could totally feel for everything katie was going through, and i was so happy that they finally worked things out!

Sasha
Napoleon
2005-05-25 . chapter 11
That was the cheesiest story I've ever read. Cheesey is not good. By the way, who's Katie?
Ha, ha, just kidding. (About not knowing who Katie is.)
Diamond Sylvan
2004-12-15 . chapter 19
omg that was quality...i have been waiting for that for so long. haha anyway wouldnt it be rather a fire hazard if articles of clothing were flying about the room with candles floating midair? KIDDING! omg that is so not what i was focusing on! anyway, cant wait for the last chapter. at least i think its the last...anyway much love, i love this. im so happy. i so wanted them to get married. oh, and ps, that was taking place the next yr right? after she graduated?
Diamond Sylvan
2004-12-15 . chapter 18
oh! I love them! anyway when u first said they had taken their robes off i was like- omg! they had sex!. and then i realized that they were wearing uniforms...anyway i love this story. I was gonna say make them get married and like happily ever after, and then i though, omg shes only 17!! that sucks.
Diamond Sylvan
2004-12-15 . chapter 17
okay i just rly have to ask this even tho ive asked it before. what is up with everyone being able to get into everyone elses dorm/common room?! I mean..honestly. Cedric is in Hufflepuff. haha anyway i love it, gg read more. and then im gonna go see if u have other stories and read them too...haha i know im cool. anything to avoid studying for my history midterm
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