Jesus, I'm gonna have a nightmare now! Original and good writing at least. Still not sure if it's worth not being able to sleep though.. Nightynight =)

Wow! I love the copper pipe at the end! Thanks for sharing this story!

"Sit tight." :) I think that rates right up there with "calm down" for ineffectual responses to distressed persons. :) Fantastic tension and suspense!

Yikes! It's tough to write a really scary/gory scene, and this chapter was appropriately repulsive and compelling! Yuck... :)

Wow, this is getting exciting! :) Side note: I love any fic that actually makes mention of someone using the bathroom. When I was young I found it so unrealistic in movies or on TV when nobody ever had to go... and so I made a point of mentioning it in every one of my stories. :) Now I am less careful to include the detail, but I am aware of it and it does come up on occasion. :)

Oh! :) I am enjoying your story immensely so far! I loved Lucas' attempt at getting a firearm almost as much as Bridger's response: "a resident moray eel in the bathroom"? :) Things that really only can be said in a seaQuest fic. :)

Okay, first off you so didn't just do that to me. You so can't leave it there. Who was the guy? He cerainly couldn't be a figment of Lucas's imagination. I mean well he could but I just find it unlikely unless Lucas was hallucinating for a reason. The story was awesome. Had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. I loved it very much. I was absolutely terrified that Lucas was in very big trouble. And the things happening back on SeaQuest give me pause. He's been traumatized.

I'm surprised that Bridger is not launching a full scale investigation. The only minor complaint that I have is that I don't see Bridger allowing Lucas to go to the station alone. Period. First off, he's a little young. Second, even if he was older, I think Bridger would want a contingent to go down. The place had been abandoned for years. There could be other problems besides the computer, such as the flooding. I would think that at least he would send a crew over to the station to go through it before he would allow Lucas over there especially on his own. But hey that's just me.

Anyways, I was hoping that there was more to this story and find out that it hasn't been updated recently. I am not above begging. . . I would dearly love to see more of it. What you have written so far is very very chilling. Keep up the great work.

The stuff happening at SeaQuest was a little too surreal for me, I think I'd have liked it better if he wasn't a... ghost or something like that. But still a good story. Kudos!

'Kimashoto' really isn't a Japanese name though. I speak Japanese, trust me. If you ever edit this, you might wanna change it. Name him Yamashita or Shimabara or something.

"Or was it?"? What's that supposed to mean??
That guy can't seriously still be alive...

Oh let me guess, the stinger is probably gone... I'm starting to fear you're actually gonna kill him. I will be seriously ** if you do... o.o

Oh no... he shouldn't go out there, am I right? If this was a movie I wouldn't be able to look at the screen now.

This is pretty cool so far! I'd be scared as hell if I were Lucas, but then again, I never once watched a horror movie willingly...

Argh! That freaked me out!
Very well written ^_^
It's difficult to make a story scary, but you definitely succeeded XD

That was, undoubtedly, the most freaky, tripped out thing I have ever read. Wow.

I didn't find much to critique on. For sure, the lack of quotation marks drove me nutty. I finally got used to that around chapter 4. Anyway, in the future, you might consider using real quotation marks for people who are trapped by grammer disease (called perfection, us sickos) so that there is ease for reading.

Good job. I really did appreciate the amount of description. More readers need to write like this.

Don't know how I missed the last few chapters of this before! I remember reading the first two chapters ages ago but I didn't know you'd written more.

Really good story - I enjoyed reading it. Very creepy. Since you left an opening for a sequal I really hope you decide to write the next part, or if not then I hope you write more seaQuest stories in the future.

Cadi.