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NIKI 2008-10-17 . chapter 6
HI

FOR STARTERS I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY. I THINK ITS ONE OF THE BEST ONES I EVER READ FOR A RANMA FIC. IT WOULD BE A SHAME FOR YOU TO FINISH SUCH WONDERFUL STORY AND TO NOT UPDATE FOR THREE YEARS AT THAT. SO I HOPE YOU READ THIS REVIEW TO HELP MOTIVATE YOU TO UPDATE SOON TO FINISH THIS STORY. YOU HAVE KEPT YOU LOYAL READERS WAITING TO LONG. I THINK YOU OWE THEM A NEW UPDATED CHAPTER SOON. BYE!
elrail 2008-10-09 . chapter 6
please write more of this story for it is awesome
TGxSTep 2008-07-08 . chapter 6
I see the it has been a long time since you've updated this fic. I really like how this story goes and I hope that someday you'll finish this fic. I can't wait to see how this story develops.. ^^
Celestial Indigo 2008-02-02 . chapter 6
Great story so far. Okay let me see if I got this recap down.

1.) Ranma's mom comes into play and notices the gender change, discovers later that it's her son, and moves him into her home.

2.) After being taught (finally) about listening instead of reacting, Ranma starts getting to know the girls better. Abet with help from Mama toning the girls down on their violent tendouscies.

3.) Nabiki and Kasumi want him too because of his naive charm and sexy good looks, bringing the total number of active potential lovers to 6.

4.) Nabiki, Shampoo, and Akane have kissed the Male Ranma, Ukyo, Shampoo, and Akane kissed the Female, leaving Kodachi and Kasumi without a kiss, Ukyo and Nabs with one, and Shampoo and Akane with two. Yummy.

5.) It's Tuesday night so Kasumi is going out on Wednesday, Nabiki on Thursday, the Trio on Friday, and a Slumber Party on Friday. (I hope you include Ranma-chan into it as the adult males are nowhere to be found.)

6.) Kodachi's gifts are still surrounding the house, but not too noticeable for some reason.

7.) Akane's still a horrible coo'd' and Nabiki's getting her first real lessons.

8.) Kuno's still an ubsessed perverted bstard, now including Mama into 'HIS' harem. Mouse is trainning hard for Three months down the road to beat Ranma, and will be tourchered mid-evil England style if he interups the date. Ryoga's world shattered around him as Akane sang praises of her past few days, including Kissing Ranma (neglecting to say it was the female Ranma). Tsubasa is "Dazed and Confussed." (Did I miss anyone?)

9.) Genma (with Soun on the Garbage Transport Ship) questions his sexuallity, despite not getting laid in 16 years. Or at least that's the way it shows in his mind. Innocent until proven guilty, and even then, still innocent until it stops his next meal or saki drink.

I think that's about everything. Oh well. I suggest that you inform Ranma of Kasumi and Nabiki wanting to become part of his harem and maybe have a little groping session between Kasumi and Ranma (-chan, perhaps?). Also, don't forget about Saffron. He's the next and last major nemisis to show up in the R-1/2 saga.

Later.
Bloomer123 2008-01-15 . chapter 1
Wow... this is seriously one of the LoNGEST fanfics i have ever read.. how long did it take u to write it??
QundraDraconum 2008-01-13 . chapter 6
I like it. It's a great counterpoint to many of the dark and sngsty 'must choose' fics. I like how you've made Nodoka so sane and in control with some odd quirks and an odd sense of humor. Actually i find it amazing I haven't found more fics like this out there. Seems most want him to choose immediately. The only other original response I've seen is a humor fic where Ranma stated that he was planning to keep everything in limbo for at least 10 years and then try and marry all that were left, after all if they've been waiting 10 years they are probably willing to share.
William 2007-12-19 . chapter 6
Wonderful. I love this story, please continue it.
Asgeras 2007-12-08 . chapter 6
Ahh...Ranma harem fics. I have mixed feelings about them, but I have to admit that it kind of makes sense for harem anime/manga to lend itself to harem fanfics.

That being said, your fic is one of the better 'Ranma mates with everyone under the sun, excluding other males (but not always)' fics out there. ^^

I'm not going to write much more than that, since I'm not sure that you're still around (not that I'm one to talk, since my fic hasn't been updated since the inauguration of George Washington...O.o). If you are, though, I wanted to let you know that I like what I've read to far (I think I read it back when it first came out, but I reread it on this time). Obviously, I'm not the only one, which is shown by having 150 reviews, which is nothing to scoff at!

No matter what, though, thanks for posting what you've written so far. It was well worth the time it took to read it. ^^
ecchansama 2007-08-31 . chapter 6
It's rather sad to see this story discontinued, as I guess it is.

The story so far is very enjoyable, well-written, intriguing (both as far as story goes, and the questions you unvoluntarily(?) raise about canon) and correct canon-wise. It's so wonderful to see someone able to point to things in canon, someone who has read the manga and seen the anime.

I wonder though, does Ukyo ever state, in canon, that her parents have passed on?

The worst part is perhaps that we are left with a situation that can go in so many different directions. As it is I feel sorry for Kodachi, envy Ukyo, and I just cheer for the others.

Again, I mourn the fact that there probably won't be any more updates, but I'll live. Very nice story anyhow.

Hope this finds you in good health, and I hope you'll find your happily ever after.

/ecchansama

PS. As usual I find the great stuff long after the last update... DS.
Ben 2007-08-16 . chapter 6
I have been reading this story from the beginning, and I really liked it. I think that getting Ranma away from the Tendou Dojo is probably the best thing I've seen anybody come up with. I REALLY appreciate the humor of the situations you've put Ranma and the other cast members into, and I also like your version of Ranma's mother; the perfect mix of doting, mischievous, and just plain creepy at times. I am deffinitely looking forward to chapter seven.


P. S. In the beginning of the story, Ranma made a bet with the girls to see who could get better grades on the next exam, the winner being able to do whatever they wished with the loser; however, there has been no mention of it since. I was wondering if you were dropping it, saving it for later, or had just forgotten about it. Also, I am from the United States, and your English grammar is just fine.
Panther 2007-07-08 . chapter 6
Excellent story. When will you update again?
Nysk 2006-08-21 . chapter 6
Excellent tale.

Wish there was more to it!
Sean Malloy-1 2006-08-19 . chapter 6
Great story you have here so far, please do your best to update this as soon as you are able to.

-In what chapter might you tell us your solution to the problem?PLEASE REPLY
SoloTalent 2006-08-10 . chapter 6
man I hope this story will be updated soon , its really great , although I think it will be hard for you to choose who Ranma will end up with in the end . The Harem Ending would be fine ^^ and a lemon to that would just make it better :D
The Time Traveler 2006-08-03 . chapter 6
WOAH! A very interesting alternate timeline! Very nice indeed. You really looked at the right reactions and managed to do a good job. I couldn't have done a better job myself.

Again, good work. Keep it up.
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