I very much enjoyed this story and really hope your planning on continuing it in the near future!

Great story, and that's compared to the fanfiction I keep, not to fanfiction at large. In fact, there's only really two classes of fanfics that I consider to be better. Those that are ultra-original (eg. stuff that makes you go "What kind of genius were they to come up with such an imaginative idea") and those that are so well done that you read them over and over and over. (I've found several of those, but I forget their names at the moment)

Anyway, as I said in my review of your Ranma/Eva crossover, feel free to ask for help. What I forgot to mention though, is that my skills extend to almost all areas of computer geekery too.

Excellent story, the slight change of Nodoka from some one Ranma fears to some one he can talk to and trust is great. The Fiances and mother working together is both amusing and interesting.

Please contiue.

Although Kunos new obsesion is a bit disturbing, but also highly entertaining, and B4Be will will be very amusing once they talk to the master women charmer, Genma.

Bloody brilliant story. One of my favourite Fanfiction stories. You're a great writer. Highly entertaining and addicting. Please update soon. Nice to read some stories that are not only based on batlles and violence.

The only thing that bugs me a bit is the lack of female Ranma. I think You should have Nodoka force Ranma to stay as a girl for a while to help him learn more about them, maybe have him join them on their shopping sprees or slumber parties nad talking about girl stuff. I think that idea has a lot of potential.

I don't see Nabiki being a horrible cook "Like Akane."

Nabiki would be the type of cook who always follows the directions exactly. Thus her food should taste like cardboard. I also picture her getting so caught up in the directions that she'd loose track that she's actually cooking food...burning it, or the like.

Plus there are all those parts of cooking where the authors of the cookbook assume you know what you're dooing. Likd "beat until you get stiff peaks..." If you've never seen a "stiff peak" you're dead in the water.

So, I picture Nabiki being her very own kind of "Horrible Cook."

Excellent writing... I like how genma and soun are way the hell outa the way...

I really like this story, hope you update soon

GREAT STORY. D

Ranma/multi.(includin' Kasumi) is always a great read.

It took awhile to find this story.

I hope ya don't give up on this. )

Keep up the great work. D

Good story.

Please continue it and you other stories as soon as you can.

“The first meeting of the B4Be club is now in session.”

LOL! That's the craziest club I've ever heard of.

Then again, I have to admit I'm curious about how the

pandified bastard pulled it off, myself.

“Is that a challenge, old ghoul?” He demanded of Cologne. It definitely sounded like a challenge to him.

“RANMA!” Akane, Kasumi, Kodachi, Nabiki, Shampoo and Ukyou all protested in alarm.

LOL! If the girls hadn't spoken up this would have turned into a lemon in short

order!

Much as it was filling her with pride over her son, the looks on the boys' faces were too painful to see. They were like puppies being kicked. Between the legs. Several times. By mules.

On steroids.

I'm sure there are groups of HS boys forming, even as we speak, to stop that Foul Sorcerer

Satome! LOL!

“Hm? I wonder where those funny sounds are coming from? Oh, I hope whoever's world just crashed around them is all right. I mean, isn't it so unfair that while I'm so happy, others aren't? Right, P-Chan? P-Chan? P-Chan! Kasumi!”

LOL! Couldn't happen to a nicer porker! Now if only they could get him to the vet and

neutered before he wakes up.

Great chapter.

really good stuff. you are setting up a really difficult situation, I hope you can resolve it without falling too much into cliche.

Your style rocks. pl;ease keep going

Nodoka finally intervened. “Boys, I think what the girls are saying is that they thank you and are flattered for your interest in them but they must decline your offer.” She just couldn't bear watching anymore. Much as it was filling her with pride over her son, the looks on the boys' faces were too painful to see. They were like puppies being kicked. Between the legs. Several times. By mules. On steroids.

One of the funiest part i seen in a Ranma 1/2 fic. hope you update again soon.

*Sharpening a butchers knife and leers art a Duck and a Pig tied up*

Come and get it Duck Flambe and Pork Cutlets!

I am not liking These two if you get my drift. Well I have some softy spot for mousse. But Ryouga is a two timer and shjould DIE and BURN IN HELL!

To claws1: And I don't see why you should love the panda as well. Ok, he father Ranma, taught him the art...and basically used Ranma in every means possible to feed his belly. If he loves his son he would have already told Akane of ryouga's curse...he would have not engaged Ranma to other girls when he already engage him to a Tendo. What kind of father would put himself before his son? Note the wedding when he attempted to take the nanichuan water. Would you really love/like a father who puts his greed before his son's welfare? One who keeps saying honor when he himself has no honor? Remember that this setting is in a country that highly values honor where death is better than disgrace.

To claws1: And I don't see why you should love the panda as well. Ok, he father Ranma, taught him the art...and basically used Ranma in every means possible to feed his belly. If he loves his son he would have already told Akane of ryouga's curse...he would have not engaged Ranma to other girls when he already engage him to a Tendo. What kind of father would put himself before his son? Note the wedding when he attempted to take the nanichuan water. Would you really love/like a father who puts his greed before his son's welfare? One who keeps saying honor when he himself has no honor? Remember that this setting is in a country that highly values honor where death is better than disgrace.

"GENMA SAOTOME, I SWEAR WHEN I GET MY HANDS ON YOU, I"M GOING TO SKIN YOU ALIVE RIGHT BEFORE I GUT AND LOP YOUR FUCKING HEAD OFF!"

With all those exclamation points you know she means buisness! Just remember kiddies, this is the woman who wedded and bedded the hated panda. The woman who sent her son off with her husband to become a man among men. Could it possibly be that she wanted Ranma to grow up to be like Genma?

I know most people on hate the man, but without him Ranma would have been to boring to be the star of his own series. Genma taught him a love for the art and helped foster that indominable spirit everyone but darkfic authors loves so much.

Considering how messed up Nodoka is this may be some sort of foreplay. If you disagree please send flames. Especially if you have 'forsaken fanfiction' because you are more mature than I.

Now that I've got that out of my system..I know that you panda haters won't change your ways, but there is one other thing that bugs me, besides the format. Ranma hasn't had a mother for as long as he can remember. He may be eager to develope that relationship but the simple fact is that the affection and familiarity are not there. It is a bit creepy for that kind of closeness to burst into being. The Infallible Maternal, that unnerring touchy-feely ghost that wafts through fanfiction strikes again!