 NavalHut 2006-03-12 . chapter 1Um are you going to continue or what? |
 Moon's Tear 2004-12-19 . chapter 1Great start! I hope it's Kibbs! Keep up the great work! |
 maggie 2004-07-16 . chapter 1 i love your story i hope its a KIBBS!! please update soon i'mdying with anticipation! |
 cheezmunky 2004-04-14 . chapter 1Make it a TATE please! You haven't done one of those yet so please! 8( pweeze. This is a great beginning. 120 words and I'm hooked. :) Please continue. |
 redrush 2004-02-21 . chapter 1 As usual I love your fic! I like playing with the pairings in my head...umm Tony? Gibbs? Ducky? *giggles*
Great job sweetie! |
 g/k 2004-02-05 . chapter 1 oh common tell us tell us tell us!
or we might just die while waiting for a sequal/continuation! |
 angelofstargatesg-1 2004-02-04 . chapter 1um... i want to know more! come on! spill.. |
 a 2004-02-03 . chapter 1 I like it
please update soon |
 cheesmunkee 2004-02-01 . chapter 1 O! Please let it be Tony! Please. Since it's after hours, it seems like Gibbs. But Gibbs coulda kicked Tony outta his house! please! Or o(lmao) Ducky! hehehe. Or Gerald. (Ducky, lmao.) |
 Zan 2004-01-31 . chapter 1 is it Gibbs?!?! I cant wait for the next chapter! |
 Katherine 2004-01-31 . chapter 1 I do hope the man who is the father is Gibbs. And I hope to read more of this story. Will you turn this in to a romance? |
 Anne 2004-01-31 . chapter 1 Hello
What for a great story/Challenge. I hope that this is Kate/Gibbs. You could turn the challenge into a Kate/Gibbs story. It would be a good and interesting storyline.
Anne |
 Syd49erSix2002 2004-01-31 . chapter 1 GREAT!! I usually don't like drabble's too much,but I like this one.Gibbs is the father isn't he,he's the only one who stays late.Tony is always wanting to get out of there early,so it has to be him.I know it's a NCIS challenge and all,but you could make this into and intresting series.It's great either way! Good job!! |
 anonymous 2004-01-30 . chapter 1 You are cruel you didn't tell us who HE was |