This is just adorable and a pleasure to read. :3 I think the interaction between Shuichi and Eiri is possibly the best part of it all; you can really make out how Eiri cares for Shuichi under that gruff mask of his.

Just one thing I'd like to point out, though; In chapter 8, you have a line that goes like so - '...a book he’d written, set in the Sengoku o-Togi Zoushi'. Now, to the best of my knowledge, 'Sengoku o-togi Zoushi' is the name of a genre of medieval fiction novel popular in that era (which is why the full title of the Inuyasha series is 'Inuyasha: Sengoku o-togi zoushi', which translates to 'Inuyasha: A feudal tale'). The actual name for the era, that is, the 'feudal age', is 'Sengoku Jidai'. :3 So it seems to me that the line might be more natural as '...set in the Sengoku Jidai'.

Other than that, beautiful writing!

I think MC is a universal term...or at the very least, one that's used in Australia as well! n_n

I loved this fic for all the wonderfulness in Gravitation that it manages to capture.

Hey! Just wanted to let you know that I've been reading your wonderful story! I've been lazy before and didn't post a comment but then I thought that maybe comments would encourage you to write more great fics, so I went for it. :D

I really like your style to write and the way you describe Eiri's and Shuichi's relationship. Eiri isn't too sassy but not that cold bastard either, that he likes so much to be.

And as you might have noticed English isn't my native language so I'm sorry for my clumsy language! :D

-Tia

Wow it has a PLOT! An excellent one too. Good job :D

This was a delight to read - and I was so glad to see you'd finished it, too!

Thank you for sharing.

Just Jill

WOW. You honestly did a wonderful job with this story; personally, I think it's one of the better (if not best) fics here. And I am dead serious when I say that. I've been getting a tad annoyed with the lack of plot and horrid grammar here.

I read this all in one sitting and, hey, you kept me from finishing my essay... Aw, scheisse. The plot was interesting, you tied it off very nicely. Neither Shu nor Yuki were terribly out of character and it seems you did quite a bit of research on this.

Damn I sound so... m, judgemental? Can't place the word. Anyway, I'm off to read more of your stuff! Great job, again.

It's really great! Everything was perfect! Sorry I don't have much to say...Kuma liked it to! Really! ~Ryu

yeah gravi!

Wonderful story but...
YOU NEVER TOLD US WHO TOHMA WAS SEEING!
Okay that's it. Now I have to go read the "B" story. Thank you!

Yet again you have done a wonderful job with your writing abilities. Keep up the good work! ^^

Splendid. Absolutely splendid. It shows that you worked a lot on this one, both in environment (gosh, hope I spelled that one right!) and character study. I couldn't tear my eyes off the screen until it was finished. I suppose I could give a more constructive review, but I don't think there is really anything I could help you improve this fic or your writing in general. I especially loved your characterization of Eiri and Shuichi, and their relationship. Well, you've heard all this before, but I hope you won't mind another review! Good job!

Yay! *Sparkle* That was great! *Happy Bouncing Fan-Girl* Must go check out your other stories! *Bouncy-Bouncy*

I just sat and read your entire story in one go and it was amazing! I loved it! I'm also fond of the way you actually do background research so that your work is precise. thank you for that. - lady

LOVE IT!
WRITE MORE... now, onegai?
Ja ne!